Whoever Keeps Me (Fic, H/D, Snaco, NC-17) 2 of 3

[ravenna_c_tan]

Thanks to a schedule swap... I am presenting part 2 of my fic today instead of Friday. Enjoy!

Title: Whoever Keeps Me (Part 2 of 3)
Author: Ravenna C. Tan
Type: Fiction
Length: 21,000 words total; This post: 8121
Main character or Pairing: Snape/Draco, Harry/Draco, Draco/Death Eaters
Rating: NC-17
Disclaimer: Non-commercial fanfic, done for

Comments

[starlollie]

Soo good

[ravenna_c_tan]

I'm so glad you liked it. :)

Whoever Keeps Me

[tsuj]

Gahhh! End part 2??
What? How? Where?
I missed part one- must go back and read it.
But first:
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I see that toast has reared its deliciously crunchy, jam-covered head yet again! :)

I love mystery:

It begins to concern me just how much Snape is away. He's never left the tower this much before. I remark as much to Potter while we're sitting down to breakfast one morning and it's obvious that Snape has already gone.

So, at about this point, I'm thinking that Snape is purposefully giving the boys time to develop a... a camaraderie? To what end? I thought that perhaps Snape cared for Draco, and wanted to see him freed. And now that Harry is captive, perhaps he will - hero that he is - take pity on Draco and escape with him?

"You'll stop if I say I want to stop? Even if we're... fairly far along

Re: Whoever Keeps Me

[ravenna_c_tan]

:D :D :D Yes, that was the one I was talking about, the hand clamp that was for you. :)

You missed part one??? Argh, I better make a link to it in the header...!

Re: Whoever Keeps Me

[tsuj]

*is giddy with joy*

and now, back to part 1 !

[arwensong]

This is just so great! I loved the growing closeness between Harry and Draco, starting with the tea and toast and ending up with some bending him over the breakfast table...lots of progress there! Pretty mysterious conversation there at the end...love the forceful Harry...and the glimpses of Snape...all perfect! Thank you for posting this earlier than predicted, I hope the final part is similarly early!

Arwen

[ravenna_c_tan]

Heh, all it will take is some other author having a meltdown in the fest and needing to swap... but hopefully everyone else will stay on time! :-P

I'm so glad you're enjoying it though. :-)

[slashpervert]

Gibbers incoherently with arousal and want...

Taking a deep breath now.

Ok, fucking brilliant and thank you so much for it early. I want the rest now, of course, but will have to go back an re-read the first two parts a few times now.

I love the way you write them! Harry is awe inspiring in this. Draco so painful. So much hot and sweet and awkward.

[ravenna_c_tan]

What I love about writing Harry is that changed as he may be by the experiences I have put him through, there are so many things about him that at the core remain the same. The saving-people thing, for one thing... :-)

[slashpervert]

Yes, exactly. It's why I continuing fall in love with him over and over again.

[ravenna_c_tan]

Me too. :-)

[mistressmaraj]

So far, not what I expected...not that that's a bad thing. Harry is very perceptive in picking up on Draco's feelings for Snape. I was worried that Harry would be upset when he found out how Draco had misled him about Snape but as it sounds like Harry's pretty knowledgeable about what's going on so I'm glad they won't be fighting about that.

I love the hot sex between Draco and Harry, and the breathplay with Draco and Snape; I'm not sure whether to be nervous for the character's next scene or excited but I suppose I'll find out soon enough.

[ravenna_c_tan]

Yes, it does seem as if Harry is better informed than Draco surmised... but there is still so much to explain. Next chapter! :) Glad you are enjoying it!