Whoever Keeps Me (Fic, H/D, Snaco, NC-17) 1 of 3

[ravenna_c_tan]

And here I am, kicking off the fic portion of the fest! My fic sprawled, so I am going to post it in three parts, the two future posts to fill in the two blank days we had in the schedule. Enjoy!

Title: Whoever Keeps Me (Part 1 of 3)
Author: Ravenna C. Tan
Type: Fiction
Length: 21,000 words total; This post: 5200
Main character or Pairing:

Comments

[hpstrangelove]

You are truly evil to leave us hanging like this! Poor Draco, and I really want to know what's going on with Severus and Harry too!!!

[ravenna_c_tan]

All questions will be answered.... eventually. :) Glad you enjoyed the opening salvo.

[roedhunt]

It's been such a long time since I've read a dark fic. Or it seems to be, being that it was yours. *g*

Such a lovely beginning, and set up so perfectly. I feel so sorry for Harry and unlike Draco, I'm convinced Snape took Harry in to protect him. He just had to wait until the others used him and got tired of him to help him. It would look too suspicious. I wonder though if Harry will ever be the same. It will truly be a while of that I'm sure.

I look forward to seeing if my suspicions are correct.

Thank you for sharing this. Simply brilliant as always.

[ravenna_c_tan]

Thank you! Draco will try his best to discover Snape's motives, I promise. :-) We'll see more of Harry in the next installment.

[raitala]

[ravenna_c_tan]

Thank you! Much juicy plot is to come. :-)

[twicet]

Wonderful and dark, I love it.

[ravenna_c_tan]

Thank you! I like dark...

Whoever Keeps Me part 1

[tsuj]

Ah. some of part 2's mysteries cleared up. *meep*

This had me laughing:

what was once the Leaky Cauldron. Now they call it the Black Rose. Appropriate, as it is always full of pricks.

And these were so heart-breaking. I feel Draco's despair as a tangible thing.

I want him to kiss me, as he used to, in the early days when he felt remorse over having to fetter me this way. I look up, though, and he is already turning away, his eyes hidden by the lank darkness of his hair.

So be it. The collar ensures my safety, my obedience, and my torment all at once. Other than that, I am free.
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Perhaps it is redundant to say he fucks without mercy. Mercy is another one of those words I don't know the meaning of any more. An abstract concept out of a philosophy book.

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Outrage is so thick in my throat that for a few moments I cannot breathe. And then I flee. Back to my room. I shut the door for the illusion of privacy. I am trembling. Shaking. My world has just been shattered and I cannot even explain why or how. What do I care what

Re: Whoever Keeps Me part 1

[ravenna_c_tan]

Hee, excellent! So glad you're liking it.

And now I wonder what prompt I'll get for HP Darkfest... *grins*