Comments | hp_tarot: fic for eight of coins: the apprentice (draco-centric with a touch of h/d, G)

snottygrrl in hp_tarot

fic for eight of coins: the apprentice (draco-centric with a touch of h/d, G)

Mar 15, 2007 12:57

Title: the apprentice
Author: snottygrrl
Type: Fiction
Length: 1225
Main character or Pairing: Draco-centric with a touch of H/D
Card: Eight of Coins
Card Interpretation: a teacher/apprentice situation where a knowledgeable person guides one's growth, turning a talent into a profession and money making venture; you can live an extraordinary life in a very ( Read more... )

harry/draco, g, round 1, by: snottygrrl, draco, fic, card: eight of coins

Comments 12

lampblack March 15 2007, 00:37:09 UTC

Ah, this was lovely!

snottygrrl March 15 2007, 09:29:39 UTC

thanks heaps, i am so glad you enjoyed it. ♥

rubymiene March 15 2007, 03:24:48 UTC

Great job! I like the different themes of each stanza and the insight each provides into the progression of Draco's life. I read the second version, and then the original, and I like the second one better. The ending is more fleshed out, and in the original it felt like it cut off too fast.

snottygrrl March 15 2007, 09:34:08 UTC

yeah the ending of the first wouldn't play out quite right. it was not my best drabble-set, but i like the purity of the 100 words exactly.

thanks so much taking the time to reading them both and tell me what you thought. i really appreciate it. ♥

ravenna_c_tan March 18 2007, 15:55:18 UTC

I still can't believe you did a stanza for each card! That's so terrific. Hmm, and this is not the first time Neville has popped up in the coins suit. Interesting.

snottygrrl March 19 2007, 00:09:47 UTC

well, all stanzas relate to the eight of coins, i just chose to follow the progression of the cards, since, well, life kind of tends to.

neville is perfectly suited to coins since coins are earth element and growing and neville is our gardener.

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snottygrrl March 19 2007, 23:10:45 UTC

thanks so much! am glad it worked for you.

ravenna_c_tan July 2 2007, 20:28:35 UTC

Hey. I'm just looking back over old fest contributions and asking everyone who posted their story with a link to another site to consider editing their original post to include the story under a cut in the actual post? I know the original rules said links were OK, which is why this is just a request, but we've "lost" some contributions already to people getting rid of their journals, and things like that. You can still keep a copy at your own journal of course! And you can use tracking/notifications to make sure you know about any comments made on the copy in the comm. Thanks.

snottygrrl July 3 2007, 11:45:04 UTC

i'm not planning on going anywhere or locking, but done nevertheless.

ravenna_c_tan July 4 2007, 18:50:14 UTC

Thank you so much!