FIC for: lightpoint

[bewarethesmirk]

Title: Limits of the Flesh
Recipient: lightpoint
Fic or Art: fic
Rating: PG-13
Characters: Bellatrix Lestrange, Rodolphus Lestrange, Rabastan Lestrange, Barty Crouch Jr., Frank Longbottom, Alice Longbottom
Warnings: torture
Summary: Alice had heard every scream her husband issued forth, and Bellatrix had in mind to make Alice scream even louder.
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Comments

[lightpoint]

Gah! *blinks and slowly recovers*

Your Bellatrix is freakin' INSANE and freakin' awesome. Her inner monologue was spot on, and her interaction with Roddy et al was very well done.

Also, she gets extra special kudos for warding Lucous out of the house. It was a very fine diss :D

Finally, creepy as anything and very very well done! Thank you!

[lightpoint]

Yeay! You like it!! :)

I'm glad Bella lives up to your standards. :) Much as I adore writing her, I'm always unsure if I manage to "get her." Hee, I thought so too. :)

You're very much welcome ^_^

[enchantedescape]

Stories like this are supposed to leave you feeling uneasy. You did a splendid job.
Beautiful!

[lazy_neutrino]

Nicely written (although darker than I would normally read)!

[shiiki]

*shivers* Your Bellatrix is chilling, frightening, just so coolly and calmly evil that it's terrifying. This really brings to life the suffering of the Longbottoms and makes the tragedy so much more worse - and that's good writing!