FIC for: remarked

[bewarethesmirk]

Title: Picture Book
Recipient: remarked
Fic or Art: Fic
Rating: R
Characters: Harry, Ron, Hermione, Ginny, Past Cedric
Warnings: A bit dark. Those who dislike Trio hintage, stay away.
Summary: While leaving Hogwarts after Dumbledore's funeral, Harry discovers Hermione's picture album and contemplates the future.
Notes: Death, who? Read to see.

Comments

[lazy_neutrino]

A younger Hermione stood proudly in a Muggle photograph with her parents at King’s Cross, smiling with her large front teeth and her books piled in her arms. Above in loopy scrawl, ‘My Years at Hogwarts’ was written in gold. Harry let a corner of his mouth kick up as he looked up at his best friends

This is a great idea - and it's a very Hermione-ish thing to do!

[noticeably]

I TOTALLY MISSED THIS WHEN IT WENT UP. :// I apologize to you for taking so long to read and review this. I've been insanely busy this month with work and I hadn't noticed that the story written for me was posted.

He was gazing out the window, studying the horizon for some odd reason, but Hermione knew that he was wearing the weight of the world that just happened to be resting on his thin, bony shoulders.

I really liked this line! I've always been fascinated by the idea of Harry having the weight of the world on his shoulders, so I'm really glad that you thought to incorporate this into this.

Harry let a corner of his mouth kick up as he looked up at his best friends.

I really like this, the way you have Harry being cheered up just the slightest by seeing Ron and Hermione.

The ending of this was heartbreaking to me. :((( I love the Trio and, I just, omg. I wanted to cry.

This is such a beautiful (and sad!) story. Thank you so much for writing it for me. ♥