FIC for: lethereality

[bewarethesmirk]

Title: Hindsight
Recipient: lethereality
Fic or Art: Fic
Rating: PG-13
Characters: Percy Weasley, Penelope Clearwater, Tonks, Bill Weasley, Kingsley Shacklebolt
Warnings: Multiple character deaths
Summary: Percy Weasley must stop living in blindness and start facing the truth about what his life has become.
Notes: This was definitely a challenge as I had never

Comments

[sexxayass]

Great characterzation of Percy. I liked that there wasn't any huge emotional display for Percy switching sides, just him speaking the truth (and admitting it to himself). And I thought the way you wove in the other characters like Bill and Tonks was good, simple but effective.

I wasn’t trying to do you any favors, I was being sympathetic. It’s what you do when you’re not a cold-hearted bastard

Thought that line was rather amusing. Fitting for an older brother to say.

Good job. :)

[lazy_neutrino]

Oh, poor Percy! I like the slow build-up here, and his responses to the situation are typically muted - collecting in the evidence, making a statement - nothing flashy, because he doesn't do flashy. He still has a lot to learn, though, poor thing!

[fai_believes]

Aw, Percy, takes his time but he gets there in the end. I thought him coming clean to the reporter at the end was an interesting choice, the media's kind of iffy even the HP world as we all know, but him being so bold was a good step forward for his character. Good use of a tragic even, character death in this case, to make him rethink things and take action, wasn't too melodramatic. I liked the ending when Percy decides not to just stand idly by anymore, the blindness works with his character well.