Healing Scrawls - a gift for seraphimerising

Apr 10, 2010 12:08

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Title: Healing Scrawls
Author: Aigooism (pinch-hitter)
Gift for: seraphimerising
Rating: R
Word Count: 9,615
Pairing: Ron/Severus with hints of Neville/Luna and Seamus/OFC
Warnings: ( Read more... )

rating: r, words: 07000-09999, character: ron weasley, oneshot, ship: ron/severus, pinchhitter, character: severus snape, !round 2 2010!, category: slash

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vipersweb April 10 2010, 15:45:40 UTC
I like the way you wrote this, using the journal entries to show us the development of the relationship with Severus as well as how alone Ron is - how harsh the war was. Nicely done.

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aigooism April 14 2010, 13:41:58 UTC
Thank you :) I always think it's more realistic that people who survives a war and whatnot . . . will have some difficulties getting over things. It's always fun to explore the what ifs! ^^

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seraphimerising April 11 2010, 01:11:38 UTC
There are so many things in here you captured that I swear you must know me: from my favourite quote from W. Somerset Maugham to the commentary that time doesn't heal pain.

Thank you for writing this for me. I love the reality you presented as well as the slow, yet sudden development of their relationship. It made everything between them even more palpable.

Thank you again! I really appreciate all the work you put into it!

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aigooism April 14 2010, 13:43:57 UTC
I am pleased you liked this! I was so worried you wouldn't because I was actually stumped on trying to come up with a non-cliche plot XD. And worried on whether you will like the first person POV. I know some people don't enjoy it ^^;;

And it's all coincidences that I used your favourite Maugham quote and the whole "time doesn't heal pain" thing LOL.

But I did enjoy writing this! <3

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seraphimerising April 14 2010, 13:47:54 UTC
Like I said, thank you; all your hard work is completely appreciated on this end. I know I'm a hard person to write for and I glad you took on the challenge. 0:)

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