The End (of Everything, she says) - a gift for the community

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Title: The End (of Everything, she says)
Author: seatbeltdrivein
Gift for: the community
Rating: R
Word Count: 2164
Pairing: Bellatrix/Harry
Warnings: violence, torture,

Comments

[scarletladyy]

No comments? =O This is a work of genius!

Bellatrix/Harry is by far one of my favourite pairings, and this was fantastic. You wrote them both so well, and I loved that by the end all he was thinking about was her. The fear he had for Voldemort and the way he clung to Bella was brilliant to read.

I'm sorry your recipient dropped out, but this was a great piece and I really enjoyed it :D

[scarletladyy]

Oh, sorry, I meant to mention, I'll be reccing it in my journal =D You really deserve so much more love for this, mystery author :D

[seatbeltdrivein]

You are so sweet. I wasn't expecting a whole lot of response to this fic simply because of the pairing and subject matter, but I had a lot of fun writing it! :D

Thanks for the awesome comment (and the rec that made me grin when it popped up on my flist!) ♥

[scarletladyy]

I know what you mean! I often find that when I write dark!fics xD

You're welcome, you definitely deserved it! =D

[chemical_haven]

I was thoroughly disgusted, but in the sense that this is exactly how Bellatrix would be if she stumbled in on that situation, took advantage of it, and got to have her way with Harry. I also really love the concept of Harry immediately believing he was capable of doing it. In the books it touches on how he's scared he might be like Voldemort, but I love how you made it so much deeper. And I definitely have to agree with scarletladyy, that I love how consumed he was with Bella by the end.

Truly twisted and wonderful. Good job mystery author! ^^

[seatbeltdrivein]

That something I wrote resonated enough with even one reader to disgust them (or make them feel any such emotion) is the thing I love to hear most in comments. Thanks so much for the review! :)

[vipersweb]

Very creepy. You do a good job of showing just how devoted to Voldemort Bellatrix is and how perfect she is for breaking Harry.

[seatbeltdrivein]

Thanks! ♥

[terrayn]

Oh, what a twist at the end!

I especially loved this line: “The kitchen,” she prompted, pushing him from the bed. Potter opened his mouth, closed it, and skittered out the door like a frightened dog, and Bellatrix was struck with a sudden feeling of mirth as she remembered another dog, one who was very nearly a human, who ran scared as a boy from his mother but laughed as death grabbed hold of him. because of course, Harry would be something of a Sirius-surrogate for Bellatrix. Very eerie and you really dug around in her deranged mind.

[seatbeltdrivein]

Oh, thank you! Getting inside Bellatrix's head is oddly fun lol.

hp spring fling: The End (of Everything, she says)

[tsuj]

Yay, m'favorite pairing!!!!!

there were two lines in particular that struck me as...well brilliant:

“You’re sick,” Potter said, and while Bellatrix couldn’t really argue, she certainly didn’t care.
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But that didn’t stop her from waiting. He would break, just as all the others did. He would break and weep and beg, and she would collect the pieces in her hands and hold them forever.