Temps - a gift for ceirdwenfc

Mar 22, 2010 01:14

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Title: Temps
Author: forchancookie
Gift for: ceirdwenfc
Rating: G
Word Count: 6,600 words
Pairing: Pansy/Seamus
Warnings: None that I can think of.
Summary: When Pansy Parkinson's ( Read more... )

category: het, ship: seamus/pansy, oneshot, words: 04000-06999, character: pansy parkinson, rating: pg, character: seamus finnigan, !round 2 2010!

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vipersweb March 22 2010, 03:24:08 UTC
Aw.. this was very sweet. I like how persistent Seamus is and how much Pansy misses him. Lovely to see that he gives Pansy the idea of what she's going to do with her life.

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forchancookie April 15 2010, 18:30:59 UTC
Thank you!

Those Gryffindors do have their uses. Pansy can't possibly get rid of him now!

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inadaze22 March 22 2010, 12:37:38 UTC
Aww this was sweeet. Pansy is so pushy and persistent. I love it.

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forchancookie April 15 2010, 18:44:32 UTC
Thank you!

I have a hard time imagining her any other way. She's going to give Seamus a run for his money.

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humbuggirl March 22 2010, 15:04:11 UTC
I loved this. It was thoroughly enjoyable. You balanced just the right amount of humour with a bit of romance. Their relationship was convincing and natural. I also really like the idea of a magical temping agency - I haven't come across that before.

Thanks for sharing!

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forchancookie April 15 2010, 18:47:55 UTC
Thank you very much.

I'm glad the slow build came across. I was sort of afraid that glossing over the jobs would make it move too fast, but I knew I'd get bogged down in them if I tried to go too in-depth.

I had a lot of fun with the Magical Temp Agency. I hadn't seen it either and it seemed like a pretty good way to get them in the same place at the same time. Glad you enjoyed it.

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entrenous88 March 23 2010, 04:42:08 UTC
What a charming story! I loved Pansy and Seamus's adventures in temping, and Pansy's horror at being asked to sit in front of Floos or scrub cauldrons. Great that she found such a fitting position at the close, with Seamus of course as her willing assistant.

Great details in this as well, like the Chocolate Frog factory and poor little Steven's accidental burst of magic. I enjoyed this lots.

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forchancookie April 15 2010, 18:50:34 UTC
Thank you.

I had fun coming up with horrible, yet believable magical jobs. Pansy might have been horrified, but she was too stubborn to just give up.

Poor little Steven may never play with toys again. He'll become one of those bookworm kids after this XD

I'm glad that you enjoyed it. Thanks for reading.

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ceirdwenfc March 23 2010, 05:15:29 UTC
I didn't want to go to bed without stopping here. I will be coming back tomorrow to comment properly, but I wanted to let you know, Mystery Author, that I read this right before bed last night, and I couldn't comment then because I was reading on my phone, but I thought it was brilliant! I loved it.

I'll have more coherence tomorrow for you, but thank you for this wonderful fic.

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forchancookie April 15 2010, 18:57:30 UTC
I'm glad that you enjoyed it. I'd be lying if I said I wasn't nervous. I was driving my poor betas batty with questions at the end there. But it was all worth it if you enjoyed it. :D

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