In Hindsight - a gift for ceirdwenfc

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Title: In Hindsight
Author:ramie_k
Gift for: ceirdwenfc
Pairing: Neville/Hannah
Rating: G
Warnings: Absolutely none.
Word Count: 1352
Summary: Where Neville realizes when you want something done

Comments

[lovesmymovement]

This was so cute! Normally, I don't really like many het fics (I am, and always will be, a slash fangirl all the way) but I surprisingly liked this. The writing was wonderful and it had a great story line.

(And oh yeah, I LOVED Harry and his enthusiastic thumbs up gesture - I could just totally picture it!!! XD lol! Great story.)

[ceirdwenfc]

This was just brilliant. I loved it!

adjourn to one of the rooms upstairs to seal the deal with a great amount of post-engagement shagging.

Simple.

But hindsight is twenty-twenty.

I loved knowing that it was all going to go wrong. I felt so bad for Neville even before I knew what happened.

My favorite part is:
"We really were just trying to help, mate." Harry said quietly.

"Well, you're not!"

and

Hannah suddenly placed her hands on either side of his head and drew him down to meet her mouth in a kiss.

The first one I could picture how excited Harry and Ron were, and how annoyed Neville was. I could hear the hiss in his voice as he answered them and turned on his heel.
The second one, I loved how Hannah just took charge and let Neville know it was all right even if things didn't go as he'd planned.

Thank you so much. I can't wait to find out who wrote this. It's just wonderful.

[secretsolitaire]

Hee, poor Neville. This made me smile.

[dynonugget]

The set up was really good - you just KNEW it was not going to go according to plan. But it was so funny!

That last line was hilarious!

[pokeystar]

Oh , this is wonderful!

Characterization, plot, description - awesome.