Comments | hp_smutfree: Fic: "Whatever Became of Draco Malfoy?" for <strong class="lj-user"><a href="/read/user/Jazzyjello">Jazzyjello</a></strong>

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Fic: "Whatever Became of Draco Malfoy?" for Jazzyjello

Jul 30, 2006 19:05

Gift for: Jazzyjello
Author: dreya_uberwald
Title: Whatever Became of Draco Malfoy?
Pairings: Harry/Draco & Ron/Luna
Rating: PG-13
Summary: Six years after the Dark Lord’s demise Harry finds himself increasingly isolated from the wizarding world and dwelling on the fate of a certain blond-haired former Death Eater.

( Whatever Became of Draco Malfoy? )

fic, draco/harry, slash

Comments 5

shiv5468 July 31 2006, 19:34:39 UTC

I really adore the ending of that story,. It jsut seems to sum up the whole craziness/rightness of the relationship.

foudebassan August 3 2006, 12:31:26 UTC

This was an unusual approach to both pairings, and very refreshing too. Thanks for writing!

apisa_b August 6 2006, 12:37:12 UTC

This fic-exchange is a great opportunity to read pairings and genres I usually don't. And I'm really thankful, for otherwise I never would have read this story. Unusual - for my reading habits - it might be, but brilliant. It just seemed so right while reading it, so logical.
**Applauds**

jazzyjello August 7 2006, 04:45:36 UTC

oh! this was so great. I really enjoyed it, thank you. Sorry I didn't review it earlier, but I was on vacation. *facepalm*

I love how well-written and thought-out it is...the descriptions, the dialogue (especially between Harry and Draco), the characterizations, the history behind the story.

The Ron/Luna wedding was so sweet. I could definately see them Snorkack-hunting on their honeymoon, hee.

“Besides,” said Luna, sagely, “Crumple Horned Snorkacks are widely thought to be attracted to bright dots.”

Hee! Perfect Luna.

And the Harry/Draco was so lovely and…heartache-y. And realistic, too: how Harry became obsessed with Draco because of guilt and curiosity. And Draco so lonely and hopeless because of his magic taken away. Sorry, I'm not very coherent, but my favorite parts:

What he remembered most about that visit wasn’t the bare walls or the dilapidated furnishings or the sound of the couple next door having a violent argument or even the black eye that his old nemesis was sporting. It was the desperate look of hope that ( ... )

haltlos August 7 2006, 15:35:25 UTC

I dunno why but I was practically squeeing as Harry fell and Malfoy called him a weirdo. *lol*

Wonderful story - it was different then most stories I read because you just give them the chance to date and state perfectly clear that it's not a passionated wonderful love story. I like it - very much indeed. Harry and Draco were both wonderful. I really enjoyed their interaction. :D