The Road Unplanned - A gift for flipflop_diva!

[scarletladyy]

Title: The Road Unplanned
Author: caitriona_3
Recipient: flipflop_diva
Pairing(s): Lucius Malfoy/Hermione Granger
Word Count: 6,511 words
Rating: R
Warnings: Dub-con, angst, slavery, physical/mental abuse, nasty words (in French - mostly names directed towards Hermione)
Summary: This was not the way she saw her life going. Victory becomes ashes as the dust settles.

Comments

[janejenajeny]

*shivers* Oh, yummm. Loved the parts about the vow, and the ending …. *squees* Lucius is such an evil bastard, isn't he?? I just adored it-the French insults scattered throughout, the part about her clothes …. Delicious!

[sassy_cat]

Holy! That was delightful.
This is an excellent example of impulsiveness as a character flaw, and while that was a heavy price to pay, I admire her willingness to own her choices with grace. I loved the ending when Lucius finally got around to cluing her in on just how useful she was going to be to him. Ha! She never stopped to wonder what he'd do with her as his possession. Brilliant.

[mistress_cinder]

Wow! That was an amazing story! The magical world can be cruel place.