Fic: Unsure and Uneasy (Rose/Scorpius), NC-17

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Recipient: open_atclose
Title: Unsure and Uneasy
Pairing(s): Rose/Scorpius
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: Sex, Language
Summary: Scorpius and Rose aren’t sure where their professional responsibilities end and their personal desires begin.
Word Count: 5725
Disclaimer: All Harry Potter characters herein are the property of J.K. Rowling and Bloomsbury/Scholastic. No

Comments

[rose_starr]

I positively love the tone of this whole fic! I love how flirty and sexy Rose is compared to Scorpius being not-quite tentative in the first part. I love her implausible but insistent deniability in the second part in concert with Scorpius's snark. And I love the whole tenor of the third part, how Rose convinces him that they really are better off being in the whole thing together!!

The sex is hot and the banter is witty, and the whole fic is a terrific and super fun read!!

Fantastic job!!

[drcjsnider]

I do so appreciate you helping me out with this!! I was so at a loss for how to end it carry it off so your advice was invaluable!

*hugs*

[sevillagranada]

I adore the banter and power play in this, you made me laugh a lot and somehow their affection shone through despite everything, maybe even more so than if they had been overtly in love.

Sneaky!Rose and Scorpius were both spot on, and I enjoyed how lighthearted the whole feel of this was despite the serious themes. Thank you, mystery author!

[drcjsnider]

Oh you are too kind! I'm glad you enjoyed it. I was afraid they might come off as too self-serving and therefore completely unlikeable.

[lunalovepotter]

What a fun & sexy pleasure! I absolutely love the clever banter (not to mention the palpable tension) between Rose & Scorpius. The sex scene was fantastic. Excellent job. :)

[drcjsnider]

Thank you so much! I love writing dialogue for these two... it is so fun :)

[telwyndubois]

This was a wonderful piece! I love your Rose and Scorpius, their job descriptions, and the fact that you set this in Turkey, of all places! Your dialogue just flows so nicely, and the plot? Utterly simple, yet wonderfully twisted and clever. I will admit to being briefly confused in the middle (you could perhaps have gone into detail a little bit more with the stealing of the artifact or whatever) - the dialogue in that particular section seems a little bit muddled and doesn't move as smoothly as the rest of your story. That's a minor comment though. Overall - fantastic job!

[drcjsnider]

Thanks so much... I knew the middle was goign to be trouble. I thought about having a scene where some Auror came and picked up Scorpius, but couldn't figure out how to keep him from going after Rose immediately or turning her over to the authorities so I copped out!!! So pathetic! heh...

[drcjsnider]

thank you so much for reading and commenting! I really like writing banter between these two :)