Happy Never After, alley_skywalker! (2/2)

[mod_neverafter]

Title: Five Times It Rained, 2/2
Author: ???
Recipient: alley_skywalker
Words:/Format: 13,000~
Characters: Severus/Lucius, Severus/Draco, unrequited Severus/Lily, background Lucius/Narcissa
Rating: with luck, R
Warnings: AU, short on-screen torture, implied sex, implied chan (Draco is 16), a penchant for purple prose, abuse of punctuation.
Disclaimer: If these

Comments

[phys_nut]

poor severus! all the pain and heartbreak he went through, and continued to put himself through so he could get his revenge...i love the look you've taken at the war from severus' point of view, very interesting and well drawn out. great job!

[alley_skywalker]

Wow, definitely not what I was expecting.
I seriously HATE Snape right now. Lol, I don’t know if you were going for that but I it’s gonna take a while for me to get that image of him out of my head. I want to make HIM “into a [F-ing] houself.”

Poor Draco :(

This was REALLY well written. The imagery was AMAZING and I love the rain theme :D Characterization, especially of Draco, is very well done. I’m amazed that you used all of my prompts, that’s awesome!
Thank you for all of your effort, this is really great :)

[masteroftrouble]

I love the further exploration of Snape's character in this. How he thinks and how he goes about getting his own revenge. Very nice!