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Meeting by the Willow, Challenge: Whomping Willow

Jun 06, 2009 13:02

Neville sat watching the Whomping Willow whip its branches wildly against the grey winter sky. The tree slapped at itself, smashing brittle limbs and sending them crashing to the ground with loud thumps. Damp soaked through his cloak and robe onto the seat of his trousers, but he didn’t care. He needed to get away from people and the wet lawn ( Read more... )

challenge: the whomping willow, genre: character piece, character: neville longbottom, character: luna lovegood

Comments 4

b00kaddict June 11 2009, 02:06:29 UTC

This is lovely. Brilliant Luna. Your last line is perfect. :)

vegablack62 June 11 2009, 06:18:14 UTC

Thanks, I worried a lot over Luna in this fic. I was worried I made her to strange. I loved the last line too. Thanks for your review.

shiiki July 11 2009, 13:26:38 UTC

I think this is perfectly Luna - as we first met her in OotP, strange and misunderstood by everyone. Nice work!

vegablack62 July 11 2009, 13:57:51 UTC

Thank you! Writing Luna is very scary. It's really hard to hit the right note.