Comments | hp_literotica: [Ficlet] Out, Damned Spot! (Severus, PG.)

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[Ficlet] Out, Damned Spot! (Severus, PG.)

Jul 19, 2005 02:19

Title: Out, Damned Spot!
Characters: Severus.
Rating: PG.
Words: Roughly 700.
Disclaimer: I don't own, so don't sue.
A/N: Written for switchknife. For the First Impressions challenge. Heavy spoilers for HBP.

( Out, Damned Spot! )

first impressions of hbp challenge, cravache, titles: m-z, severus snape

Comments 14

karasu_hime July 18 2005, 09:50:24 UTC

How appropriate and how sad.

Thank you.

cravache July 18 2005, 09:55:09 UTC

It is sad. Poor Severus. :(

Thanks!

ravenpan July 18 2005, 11:26:11 UTC

*sobs* that was beautiful.

cravache July 18 2005, 11:27:39 UTC

Thanks. :)

lizardspots July 18 2005, 13:14:45 UTC

*criez* Oh Snape, oh my dear Snape. *cuddles him* This was beautifully written, Toni. *smooches*

cravache July 18 2005, 13:23:26 UTC

*cuddles close* Thanks, Lizard. My poor boy...

Here from the quibbler_report... xylophonists July 18 2005, 22:01:43 UTC

Oh that's nearly making me cry. I so haven't recovered yet. :( Wonderful writing.

Re: Here from the quibbler_report... cravache July 18 2005, 22:09:06 UTC

If it is any consolation, I cried when I was writing it.

Thank you so very much. :)

switchknife July 18 2005, 22:25:37 UTC

Oh, Toni. Oh. That's... that's heartbreaking. And so Shakespearean; Severus' internal monologue here seems remarkably like Richard III's monologue in that nightmare scene in Shakespeare's play ( ... )

cravache July 18 2005, 22:36:21 UTC

:O It is so uncanny you mention this monologue, as I was thinking of this when I was reading HBP, that part where Snape is screaming at Potter about him not being a coward. I simply adore Richard III, and this monologue, like you, has always been one of my favourites in Shakespearean literature. The utmost pinnacle of human brokenness is both fascinating and devastating.

I'm glad you liked it. :) Thank you so much for reading.

♥