"Easy" R HP/DM Unsympathetic character challenge

[underlucius]

As the last piece WAS a cheat, and I wasn't following my own rules, I decided to bite the bullet and write the companion piece to Stigmata this time from Harry's PoV. Hate him.

Easy NC-17 HP/DM
Beta-ed by Eumenides1
Disclaimer: I am not She, if I were, there would be a lot more of this sort of thing.

Comments

[underlucius]

thank hon, you don't need to comment you know - i know how much you like my stuff

*beams*

But i am glad you do

*hugs*

xxx

[t_winkle725]

I won't. I just need to stay away from him, that's all.

Mmmhmm. :)

[underlucius]

Yes, you are fooling no-one Harry, so stop pretending...

:D

xxx

[satinvalkyrie]

Oh goodness. A new story from both you and Eumenides in one day. *shakes head*

I'm overwhelmed and delighted.

This was lovely. I don't like Harry any better than you all do, I don't think. *grin* All this Harry torture is such good fun.

I'm agreeing about the distinct voice and characterization between this and Stigmata. Draco's POV is transcendant, as though his pain and confusion exalts him. Harry's is confused and bitchy. How very apropos. *smirk* Have I told you I love you lately?

[underlucius]

Thank you sweetie. I've never written Harry's Pov before so I actually enjoyed this. he deserves to suffer the little bleeder.

feedback like yours keeps me going onwards.

loves you too.

xxx

[satinvalkyrie]

*cheers and frolics*

Ah yes, love. *sigh* This challenge is giving such interesting stories to us all... I've decided to dig deep for my hated character. *snicker* And the way I see it, it's canon...

I thought I'd announce that I'm *gasp* writing slash for the hated person challenge. It's being betaed by my bi boyfriend. That should keep me from freaking over the mechanics, eh? *grin* I've actually been writing a lot of slash lately due to the encouragement of you all, and once any of it's done, I'll post it here. *grins some more*

*mwah!*

~SV

[underlucius]

"Bi boyfriend!!!!!!!!!!!!"

*is consumed by jealousy*

[jadecaptain]

Mmm, I haven't read much in this fandom lately, mostly cause it's hard to find fics that are...yummy!good! and just simply good! This however, I can't just sit back and not praise from my little nothing brain.

It's the differences between this and Stigmata that is the greatest part. It's rare to find people who can capture two completely different characters and as such write them that way.

simply amazing and besides being hot, it was well written and I'm a whore for good H/D fics. So yes, good job. This is about contructive as I can get, sorry.

[underlucius]

Thank you , it WAS a challenge writing Harrys voice, more so Draco, because the Draco piece is more how I "normally" write, so to try and get inside an hormonal angry boy was difficult.

But thank you! I may try and write a proper story with these two one day.

Much appreciated.

xxx

[watchpoint]

Came here via quickquote. I loved it. Mind if I friend you?

[underlucius]

Ooo - I'd be honoured! Thank you!

xxx