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Ides of March Challenge Fic II: "Unkindest Cut", Snape, R/S, J/L

Mar 27, 2005 09:15

Title: Unkindest Cut
Author: scythia
Word Count: 672
Pairing: Snape POV; implied Remus/Sirius, James/Lily
Notes: Not exactly "literotica," but inspired by hp_literotica's Ides of March challenge (another one!), so I hope it's OK to post. Crossposted to my personal journal. One of the lines in here is from yeats, with her permission, for which I am grateful ( Read more... )

marauders, james potter, albus dumbledore, regulus, sirius/remus, titles: m-z, james/lily, challenges, sirius, severus snape, scythia, remus lupin, lily evans potter

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spessartine April 28 2005, 08:52:42 UTC

This is wonderful - so understated, and yet it all hangs to together so well. I love Snape lurking about and watching everything - just watching. This bit is especially great:

A thousand thousand words well up, none of them to be said. “Don’t worry, Severus,” says Regulus with a ghastly smile. “Crying’s my favourite.” Snape stands up straighter, looks down his nose, practices disdain.

Regulus whore? Moi?