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Mar 23, 2005 00:59

Underlucius gave me permission to post this piece. I wrote it while listening to Regina Spektor's song, "Us". ( You can find the video for it if you click that link and click on the 'video' tab. )

Title: Us.
Author: Serpentigena
Pairing: Gen.
Rating: PG-13.
Word Count: 660.
Genre: Post-War Fic. This might fit the definition of Crackfic.
Warning: Character Death(s).
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ron weasley, hermione granger, titles: m-z, harry potter, serpentigena

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weedy_tea March 23 2005, 05:43:10 UTC
zowsa - lovely lovely lovely. i like the images woven throughout. hermione and ron sound a little off and very transparent - as they should. lovely job, very nice.

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hot_jupiters March 23 2005, 16:53:15 UTC
Thank you. Yes, definitely off. I wanted the whole thing to have a quasi-frantic, but still oddly stagnant sort of hysterical feel to it, ha. If that made any sense. *grins*

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ourdarkdreams March 23 2005, 06:58:46 UTC
Beautifully written!! Nice use of the lyrics to fuel and give weight to the images, as well as to those flighty thoughts that come so quick at the end.

I'll be putting this in the memory books.

Caleb
aka glass_wishes

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hot_jupiters March 23 2005, 16:54:12 UTC
Thank you!

Wow, making this a memory is such a compliment!

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