Comments | hp_literotica: poetry challenge: "shades of dust", r, sirius/regulus

moonix in hp_literotica

poetry challenge: "shades of dust", r, sirius/regulus

Jun 16, 2006 18:14

This is my submission for the poetry challenge. I am awfully sorry this is so late, but I mixed up the deadline date with another one and was convinced it was June 15th, so I told my betas not to hurry. *headdesk ( Read more... )

regulus, poetry challenge, titles: m-z, moonix, sirius, sirius/regulus

Comments 6

Anja! bloodrebel333 June 16 2006, 18:05:00 UTC

You know how much I like this already, but it doesn't hurt to repeat. Awesome story. :)

Rachel! moonix June 16 2006, 18:36:17 UTC

Heh, no, it certainly doesn't hurt. Thank you. :)

smoo_001 June 16 2006, 19:28:20 UTC

this felt like the end of a long, hot summer somehow. I don't know why, but I loved it anyway. Bittersweet and aching.

moonix June 16 2006, 19:42:22 UTC

Thank you, it was supposed to provoke that kind of feeling. :)

spikeyboots June 17 2006, 01:21:02 UTC

As always you manage to combine words in the most unexpected and beautiful ways - this is so thick with desire and imagery and obsession and by the end - almost insanity. I love how you have structured it - to show how Regulus unravels - LOVE IT - amazing work.

xxx

moonix June 17 2006, 14:41:02 UTC

Yay, you read it! Thank you so much! :D

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