Fic: Touch (Peter/Lucius, R)

[gehayi]

This is the creepiest icon I have. Hence, even though it's an A Song of Ice and Fire icon, I'm using it for a dark HP story.

Title: Touch
Author: gehayi
Pairing: Peter/Lucius
Genre: Darkfic, Slash
Rating: R for torture, mindfuck, not-very-graphic foreplay and sex
Word Count: 3,235
Disclaimer: This story is based on characters and situations created

Comments

[dreamsinvisible]

This is amazing. I really enjoy how the story serves to fill-in-the-blanks of Peter's past and how he went from loyal friend to traitor. The characterization of Lucius and his plot to slowly break down Peter's mind is also very well done. Lovely work. :D

[gehayi]

Thank you! I'm very glad you liked it!

[ani_bester]

. . .
That was everything I wished I'd had the guts to write when I wrote "Illusions."
And it was perfectly heartbreaking.

And sickening because it could ahve been one of the case studies out of any of the books I read on torture.
I lvoed the litle things, like Bella casting doubt of Dumbledore's competence!

Thank you for dealing so realistically with what torture is and how it effects peope.

I've been waiting for a fanfic like this since I entered the fandom!

And randomly, the "Slytherin boy", nice touch! *L*

[gehayi]

it could ahve been one of the case studies out of any of the books I read on torture.

Really? Wow. I didn't realize that.

I lvoed the litle things, like Bella casting doubt of Dumbledore's competence!

Thanks. It just made sense that the Death Eaters would undercut Peter's faith in his leader and his friends; they'd have to make him feel that he had no other choice. (Since Voldemort said in GoF, "You would not be here if you had anywhere else to go," I don't think Peter's much of an ideologue --unlike, say, Bella.)

I've been waiting for a fanfic like this since I entered the fandom!

Wow! Thank you ten thousand times. That's...huge.

And randomly, the "Slytherin boy", nice touch!

Yes, I just couldn't resist a tiny reference to Peter/Regulus.