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atlantis_quill in hp_literotica

Moments (Remus/Sirius, pg)

May 13, 2006 10:07

Title: Moments

Pairing: Remus/Sirius

Rating: pg

Word count: 655

Comments: This is my first post here, written in celebration of being invited to join and inspired, at least a little bit, by graduating college (ack). Feedback is always loved.

The Central Line

The train rattles - shaking the seats, drowning out sound, whitewashing the ( Read more... )

remus lupin, sirius/remus, titles: m-z, atlantis_quill, sirius

Comments 9

purple_socrates May 14 2006, 05:17:38 UTC

that was beautiful, stunning in fact. i loved the way you used language, the rhythmn and pacing were perfect and the underlining sadness was moving.
loved it x

atlantis_quill May 16 2006, 14:33:34 UTC

thank you! i'm glad it pleased!

cecine May 14 2006, 07:03:37 UTC

Beautiful.

atlantis_quill May 16 2006, 14:34:05 UTC

thankyou!

thistlerose May 14 2006, 07:27:57 UTC

This is really beautiful. *sigh*

atlantis_quill May 16 2006, 14:34:29 UTC

thanks!

moon_lit_night May 15 2006, 20:19:52 UTC

Beautiful. I loved the pacing.

atlantis_quill May 16 2006, 14:35:05 UTC

thanks!

moonix July 3 2006, 16:13:14 UTC

:O

A..aah. Gorgeous. That touch of shyness and newness and inner restlessness. And then London. And. ♥

I like your style. It's simple, but every word creates such an amazing atmosphere.