Fic: A Heaven in Hell's Despair, Lucius/Narcissa. PG13

May 08, 2006 11:29

Title: A Heaven in Hell’s Despair
Author: Sionnain
Fandom: Harry Potter
Summary: He chose a diamond over everything else, and Lucius Malfoy has never regretted his decision.
Pairings: Lucius/Narcissa, mention of Bellatrix/Rodolphus
Rating: PG13
Warning: None, though it’s a bit angsty.

AN: Written for Siyui in this year's Unexpected_Task ficathon. Thanks to Kethlenda for the ( Read more... )

titles: a-l, lucius/narcissa, lucius, sionnain, narcissa black malfoy

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quivo May 8 2006, 10:23:39 UTC
Beautiful. I've always had a bit of a soft spot for Lucius/Narcissa, and to see it doens so well is breathtaking. I really liked the imagery you used, especially in the first scene, with him standing by her throughout the ball - just lovely.

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inathunderstorm May 8 2006, 11:13:52 UTC
Thank you! This was the pairing that got me into fanfic, so I'm glad that you enjoyed it :)

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hansbekhart May 8 2006, 10:35:26 UTC
This was gorgeous. I love seeing Lucius and Narcissa done well, as a loving couple but without having lost any of the hardness that they show in canon. I love Lucius' adoration of her, especially at the beginning and at the end.

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inathunderstorm May 8 2006, 11:14:40 UTC
Thanks!! I'm a fan of L/N as a couple who are passionate, cold, ruthless, and loving. I think it's fascinating that they could be so devoted and so...well, evil. *g*

Thank you!!

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dementedsiren May 8 2006, 10:58:32 UTC
This was absolutely lovely. The steady quality to it, though the settings changed, left a great impression, and the descriptions and Lucius' voice worked wonderfully.

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inathunderstorm May 8 2006, 11:15:14 UTC
Thank you so much! I'm so glad you liked it :)

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kethlenda May 8 2006, 12:14:19 UTC
Yay! So glad to see this pop up here--I loved this fic and still do. I love your strong!Cissa.

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inathunderstorm May 8 2006, 12:20:52 UTC
Thanks, babe, and for the beta as well. *loveses*

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azurelunatic May 8 2006, 12:52:42 UTC
I like it very much. You've captured the devotion and hardness very well. I'd always thought of Narcissa as more brittle than that, but I like your interpretation.

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inathunderstorm May 8 2006, 12:55:05 UTC
Thanks :) I'm glad you enjoyed!!

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