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Rhapsody (Draco/Luna, with illustrations by shored) R

Apr 09, 2006 12:39

Title: Rhapsody
Author: hansbekhart
Illustrator: shored
Summary: And so the Manor burns. (Draco/Luna, rated R)
Notes: Done for the challenge community, 20_inkspots. Please remember the talented shored in your feedback!

( It falls like a breath without words, hitting the soil and the monsters turn wet faces up to look at the grey dawn. )

draco malfoy, draco/luna, luna lovegood, titles: m-z, hansbekhart

Comments 2

sinclair_furie April 10 2006, 00:33:02 UTC

So powerful. You conveyed the desperation, panic and confusion very well. I felt like I was there with Luna, running blindly in a fire, trying to find my friends.
The ending is like finally catching your breath- so calming.

hansbekhart April 10 2006, 11:34:24 UTC

Thank you so much! Very glad that you enjoyed it.