fic: sequence of times, pg-13, regulus

[moonix]

Erm... since some people insisted that I should post this here, I'll just get over myself and finally say hello. :) It's not the most brilliant thing I have ever written and as you probably guessed already, I'm not too content with it, but there you go. Perhaps you can help me find out what it is that I'm not comfortable with

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[moonix]

Thank you. :) A lot of people told me they liked that sentence, actually. Hee.