fic: No More After [Remus/Sirius G Valentine Challenge]

[txilar]

Title: No More After
Author: txilar
Rating: G
Word Count: 615
Characters: Remus/Sirius
Challenge: hp_literotica’s Valentine Challenge

Once more and no more after,
Whatever comes with years
-Swinburne

Comments

[wildestranger]

This is beautiful. You write his longing so well.

[txilar]

I was afraid it wouldn't come across... strong enough. Thank you so much.

[spessartine]

“And then everything happened,” he whispered, “Everything since then happened.”

Gah, that line is just heartbreaking. Poor Remus.

[txilar]

Haha, you softie! 'Poor Remus' indeed!

Though I wish you could hear it like I hear it in my head. Oh it's even more sad there. ;_; There's a little catch in that second 'e-everything' that I just can't write in. *sniff*

Thank you!

[melandry]

So poignant. The ending, in particular, really made my heart twinge. And I like perceptive Harry and oblivious Ron is, of course, dead-on. Well done.

[txilar]

Thank you so much. Sorry for the heart twinging though. ^_~

[mauvaise_etoile]

Wow that was really sad. Beautifully written.

[txilar]

Thank you ^_^

Fic: No More After

[secondsilk]

Oh, sad toe-curling gloriousness.
I love perceptive Harry. And the quietness of everything here.

Re: Fic: No More After

[txilar]

Oh thank you very much. 'Quietness' is exactly what I was aiming for ^_^