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Nov 12, 2005 00:34

TITLE: Songs They Sang - 1 - Another Kind of War
AUTHOR: eudaimon
PAIRING: Ted Tonks/Andromeda Black
RATING: NC17 for Mr Tonks' fertile imagination.
NOTES: This is the long, plotty Andy/Ted story that I've been talking about writing forever. It's the most, in my opinion, interest canon relationship that we know nothing about. There is no canon for this ( Read more... )

andromeda black tonks, titles: m-z, eudaimon, ted/andromeda, ted tonks

Comments 5

wildestranger November 12 2005, 03:45:50 UTC

Oh this is so good. how you show much in so few words, how there is a real Ted and a real Andromeda here. Your skills in characterisation and narrative never cease to amaze me.

Also your Ted and Andy are the bestest there are. ;)

hakuen November 12 2005, 13:27:00 UTC

That is so beautiful. It's amazing, perfect, I love it. Thank you for writing it.

eudaimon November 12 2005, 14:35:40 UTC

Thankyou. More parts on the way. It's a story begging to be told.

scythia November 14 2005, 22:00:59 UTC

This is charming. I like "Andromeda snaked and filled the sky."

bellaisa November 19 2005, 08:22:42 UTC

This is such a wonderfully charming piece. Your portrayal of Ted and Andromeda is compelling, especially given that we know virtually nothing of the two. There are a few sentences that are fuzzy and needed clarification ( He was just fifteen, and what fifteen year old boys like football and movies and illicit beer. What fifteen year old boys like is a mystery, even to fifteen year old boys. and She walked away from him on tip-toes, timing how long it took him in baby, fairy steps, swinging her long arms for balance.) but this story was just so wonderful that it was easy to overlook them. And I love love love the card he gives her - such a wonderful idea to create it as a graphic. And the pictures at the very top, the polaroids of Andromeda, are a very nice touch.