fic: Struck Sharp Through [Lucius, Regulus PG 500 Watchers Challenge]

[txilar]

Title: Struck Sharp Through
Author: txilar
Rating: PG
Word Count: 527. One for each watcher, which is really just a sly way of cheating.
Characters: Lucius, Regulus
Challenge: 500 Watchers

I waited to watch you linger
With foot drawn back from the dew,
Till a sunbeam straight like a finger
Struck sharp through the leaves at you.
Swinburne

Comments

[hlglne]

OOH foreshadowing and chanforeboding and all creepy things!

[txilar]

Hehe, yes, forechanshadowboding! =) I want to do more creepy things with this without it getting icky.

[txilar]

Heee, yes, a shiny new toy with big eyes =) Thank you so much!

[kenazfiction]

Oh, doom, doom, DOOM! A wonderful juxtaposition of innocence and malevolence.

[txilar]

=))) Thank you so much. The beginnings of something that can only grown more twisted ;)

[lyras]

Ohh, very creepy! Poor Regulus, he doesn't know what he's let himself in for :/. There's a brother? - I think that's my favourite line. Very well done!

[txilar]

Thank you so much. I wish you could see the delivery for that line in my head, I think you'd like it even better. ;)

"Ohh, very creepy!"
Ah, that's lovely! Thank you again!