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Fic/Art collaboration...Harry/Draco...This is how my heart breaks...

Oct 05, 2005 08:44

Title: This is how my heart breaks
Author: jamie2109
Artist: saoni
Rating: R
Pairing: H/D
Word Count: 867
Summary: But it is not a smile of lovers or friends; it is bitter and twisted and speaks of nothing and everything that lies between us, and I hate him all over again.
Warnings: None
Disclaimer: Not Ours, only the story is.
A/N: For the hp_synergy fic/art ( Read more... )

jamie2109, draco malfoy, titles: m-z, harry potter, harry/draco

Comments 8

glass_wishes October 5 2005, 07:29:00 UTC

This is beautiful. The desperate need, so strong that no matter what the truth, you have to at least touch, to feel and taste, to capture just a little bit for yourself. Even when just a look can shatter the illusion. Hunger and need can never be denied, no matter how much it breaks the heart and soul.

You've caught it here. Simply beautiful.

jamie2109 October 5 2005, 07:40:08 UTC

That's right and it most often takes great pleasure in breaking the heart and the soul. When you love that hard, you take what you can get, knowing that it will break you in the process, but unable to stop loving anyway. I'm glad you thought I captured that, it's what I was aiming for.

Thank you so much.

1_bad_idea October 5 2005, 16:54:50 UTC

So sad and so beautiful!

jamie2109 October 5 2005, 17:06:43 UTC

Thank you honey!!! I actually did like this one, and I dont like a lot of my work. *hugs*

PS I want to see you sign up for the AWDT birthday fic exchange too - you'll have two weeks to write 500 words, not too much. *is bossy* hehe.

1_bad_idea October 5 2005, 17:19:03 UTC

You should like all of your fics, they're great! The flow of this one is really lovely.

I would be quite afraid that I'd let someone down if they expected something specific from me. I also have three major exams, a quiz, and two essays that are all within the next two weeks. I'm so stressed out!

jamie2109 October 5 2005, 17:33:51 UTC

Thanks ok honey. next time then maybe? RL comes first. *hugs*

hansbekhart October 6 2005, 11:54:24 UTC

Oh, beautiful. Very sensual, and fits very well with the art, which is also gorgeous. It felt very much like "literotica" ... the sort of pieces that this comm was made for.

jamie2109 October 6 2005, 17:15:57 UTC

Oh thank you very much for that! I am very pleased you thought so. :)