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No Blinding Light

Oct 04, 2005 02:22

Title: No Blinding Light (or tunnels to gates of white)
Pairing: Remus/Tonks
Rating: Very soft R
Warnings: HBP spoilers
Words: 1215
Summary: At first he kept his distance, almost afraid; then he saw how perfectly she fit into his hands, his cracking life, and thought perhaps he could set old loves and habits aside for what is almost certainly ( Read more... )

remus/tonks, remus lupin, titles: m-z, tonks, justholdstill

Comments 20

hansbekhart October 4 2005, 10:29:54 UTC

Oh, beautiful! I've been bitten by the Remus/Tonks bug too, but you've done a much better job than I :). Wonderful characterization for both of them, and I especially loved the weirdness of the beginning scene. We get such a sense of history and things unspoken.

justholdstill October 4 2005, 10:44:12 UTC

Thank you so much! I love the beginning scene too - it came to me, fully formed and out of nowhere in the middle of the night, and I think it just works.

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justholdstill October 5 2005, 00:41:19 UTC

Wow, thank you so much! *blush*
And aside from a little cold, I am well!

kethlenda October 4 2005, 16:07:13 UTC

Oooh, beautiful. I especially love the description of Remus as "too old for himself."

penknife October 5 2005, 04:29:33 UTC

Ah, lovely. I love the beginning scene, and Tonks writing this poem -- and, yes, it's the perfect one -- on the wall.

justholdstill October 5 2005, 11:52:32 UTC

Merci Beaucoup! Thanks also for your wonderful rec - it really made my otherwise depressing morning!

blackxlupin October 5 2005, 10:10:43 UTC

I loved this.