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Fic: "Of Morning and Mourning"

Sep 22, 2005 10:02

Title: Of Morning and Mourning
Author: Sionnain
Pairing: Albus/Minerva
Rating: T/PG13
Genre: Angsty, with a little romance.
Word count: 2242
Summary: Minerva wakes up early, and reminisces.
Warnings: Spoilers for HBP.

AN: Written for Emcue for the Albus Ficathon over at Sweetsaddiction.

Thanks to Kethlenda and Jazzypom for the beta.

( Of Morning and Mourning )

albus/minerva, albus dumbledore, titles: m-z, sionnain, minerva mcgonagall

Comments 14

musesfool September 22 2005, 08:32:34 UTC

Oh, that's heartbreakingly beautiful.

*sniff*

I love this McGonagall.

inathunderstorm September 22 2005, 08:33:44 UTC

Aww, thank you. *blushes*

caroleotter September 22 2005, 08:34:39 UTC

That is so, so beautiful. My heart hurts. Thank you.

inathunderstorm September 22 2005, 08:36:08 UTC

Thank you very much, I appreciate the review!

Morning and Mourning (minnie/albus) ravenpan September 22 2005, 10:08:55 UTC

That was heartbreakingly beautiful.

Re: Morning and Mourning (minnie/albus) inathunderstorm September 22 2005, 10:18:12 UTC

aww, thank you :D

paranoidsistah September 22 2005, 11:14:51 UTC

I love the imagery in this. The trail of such shiny words like shimmering, glints, sparkle, glittering and the how they are tied to love, death, dread and memory.

I love the taste going back and forth from sweet to bitter as the story unfolds.

I love the missing teacup and how the strands of memory hold no substance. Also the way you make Albus seem really sexy and Minerva softer without losing her edge. And how deep and mature their love is. Beloved and lovely such great words to describe a lover and timely too.

I only have one small bit of concrit, there's a lil typo where Albus tells Minerva that she'd be lovely in white, you have "you'd lovely in white" and I think it should be "you'd be lovely in white." But that is all.

Your story is so poetic and moving. Thank you for writing it.
:)

inathunderstorm September 22 2005, 11:18:44 UTC

Gah! I miss words all the time. I think my mind moves too fast sometimes. Thank you, I'll edit the post and fix that.

And thank you for such a lovely review--really, I'm honored you would take the time to say such nice things about the story. It's very kind of you.

paranoidsistah September 22 2005, 11:22:04 UTC

oh stop it. All I did was read and enjoy it, you wrote the beautiful piece. :)

inathunderstorm September 22 2005, 11:26:04 UTC

Yes well. *blushes* I get all blushy at such nice reviews :D

hermionesviolin October 23 2005, 14:05:48 UTC

Great description here. You make established Minerva/Albus feel so natural.