Comments | hp_holidaygen: fic for <strong class="lj-user"><a href="/read/user/maraudersaffair">maraudersaffair</a></strong>: Shades of Gray: Part II (Marauders, Snape, Dumbledore, PG-13)

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fic for maraudersaffair: Shades of Gray: Part II (Marauders, Snape, Dumbledore, PG-13)

Dec 20, 2006 19:38

Title: Shades of Gray (2/2)
Recipient: maraudersaffair
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: Language
Characters: The Marauders, Snape, Dumbledore, and some Highly Suspicious People
Author's Notes: "Remus Lupin and Sirius Black were best friends. Why, then, despite everything, did it take Remus so long to believe Sirius's innocence in Prisoner of Azkaban? It all began on a ( Read more... )

!2006, !fic, character: severus snape, character: marauders, character: remus lupin

Comments 4

velvetmouse December 21 2006, 14:57:21 UTC

oooph. I was totally not expecting the ending - well, obviously I knew what was going to happen but I totally wasn't expect who the person working with Peter was... A very compelling take on what might have happened.

I also adore the gratuitous use of Capital Letters. It lent a levity to the whole story that kept it from being ponderous. Very nicely done!

alexajohnson January 3 2007, 06:01:09 UTC

Oh thank you!
I'm glad you weren't expecting the ending--this is my first foray into the land of mystery and suspense, so I was hoping the entire time I wasn't being too obvious about it!
And I'm happy you loved the capital letters--they were much fun to add!
Thank you so much for reading/commenting despite it's length!

lyras December 23 2006, 21:06:35 UTC

Oh, poor Remus! I really wasn't expecting the Obliviate, but it does make sense. The ending is beautifully done, too.

alexajohnson January 3 2007, 06:03:27 UTC

Thank you so much!
I was worried the length would scare people away, lol. And I'm glad you thought the Obliviate makes sense...it took me ages and multiple betas to get that part right!

I'm so glad you enjoyed it!