fic for jessica_v_darcy: A Word with the Twins (Ron, Fred, PG)

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Title: A Word with the Twins
Recipient: jessica_v_darcy
Rating: PG
Character(s) : Ron and Fred Weasley
Warnings: None
Author's Notes: Many thanks to Patagonian, who took time to beta-read this story, even though she was very busy with NaNoWriMo. And congratulations to her for making it through the whole 50 000 words. And merry Christmas to everybody!

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Comments

[shocolate]

Oh!

Yes, that really hurts, that Malfoy used the Powder - thank you for having Ron sort them out.

[such_heights]

This all felt very in-character to me, nicely done! And it made me laugh that after all of that adult drama, there's still Molly left at the end to give Ron a telling-off.

[snorkackcatcher]

Poor Ron. Sounds right that he would still feel awkward at the end of that.

[chiralove]

Wonderful! I love seeing the dynamic between the brothers like this ... and it's so great to see Ron stand up to the twins like this. :)

[chiralove]

I just wanted to say again how much I liked this story and to let you know that I've rec'ed it on my LJ, here - I hope you don't mind!

[chiralove]

Oh, wow! Thank you!
The author

[jessica_v_darcy]

This was so good to read - the moment seems like such a minuscule one, but you made it a great fic.

"But let me tell you something, Fred," he continued. "Remember the bloke who gave you the money to start your shop? He saved the lives of three people in the family…"

"Yeah, well, he should’ve stopped at two," muttered Fred. He wasn’t meeting Ron’s eye.

The characterization was excellent as well - I could easily see Fred saying that, and I loved the irony of the ending.

Thanks so much, and Happy Holidays!

[jessica_v_darcy]

I'm glad you liked it. Happy holidays to you to!
The Author