fic for noticeably: Pauses and Intentions (Harry, Neville, PG)

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Title: Pauses and Intentions
Author: tulleskirt
Recipient: noticeably
Rating: PG
Characters: Harry Potter, Neville Longbottom
Warnings: Spoilers for Deathly Hallows, one minor bad word.
Author's Notes: Hey there mystery giftee-I really liked your prompts, but I couldn't decide whether to do Harry-and-Teddy, Neville-after-the-war, or something else entirely…so I tried

Comments

[noticeably]

OH MY GOD OH MY GOD OH MY GOD. I have been waiting for this story ALL MONTH and just, omg. so excited. sdjkflgjdgkjsd

Pauses and Intentions

[catsintheattic]

I liked the awkwardness of their conversation and how they were able to bond again over something very simple. It's the simple stuff - instead of sharing complicated thoughts - that will really bring them back to life.

[randomisedhabit]

Very nice - their conversation strikes me as very realistic. I really like how Harry just doesn't want to talk about the past anymore, but Neville naturally does - how could he not, having found out about the Prophecy. The reference to Severus made me smile :) Very good!

[slam_girl]

This felt so true to character for Neville and Harry. I like the way you played out their conversation with all that awkwardness and Nev wanting to talk about the war but also infusing in bits of what's going on in their own lives. Nice little reference to Snape there at the end ^^

[dizilla]

I love the awkwardness in this. It's perfectly them. Also a great place to end it, hehe. Nicely done!