fic for lottelita: One Way Only (The Cattermoles, PG)

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Title: One Way Only
Author: lazy_neutrino
Recipient: lottelita
Rating: PG
Character(s): The Cattermoles
Author's Notes: The third scene draws heavily from Chapter Twelve: 'Might is Magic' of Deathly Hallows; some text is lifted directly, while the rest of that scene tells the same events from a different point of view. Thank you to my wonderful, and very rapid, beta

Comments

[lorelei_lynn]

Well done. I do like your hopeful ending after the previous tension - the arrest scene was particularly chilling.

[lazy_neutrino]

Thank you!

[shiiki]

My, my, my. I always wanted to know what happened to the Cattermoles, and this fits the bill perfectly! Thank you for writing it!

[lazy_neutrino]

Thank you!

[slam_girl]

I always wondered what happened to the Cattermoles. This works :) Great missing moment, you got Umbridge's nastiness spot on.

[lazy_neutrino]

She's horrible, isn't she?

[kethlenda]

Thank you so much for filling in a happy ending for what happened to the Cattermoles--JKR leaving that open-ended is one of the bits from DH that kind of haunts me. Good job.

[lazy_neutrino]

It's always the innocents that trouble us, isn't it? I wished Frank and Alice could have had a happy ending, even though I knew there was no way. And I don't think I could have stood it if she had killed Neville!

[magnetic_pole]

A lovely story, and a great moment with Stan at the end. Like the others have said, this was a missing moment I'd wanted to read. Maggie

[lazy_neutrino]

Thank you! The world needs more Stan, I think.