fic for serpentpixie: For Want of a... (MWPP and others, PG)

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Title: For Want of a...
Author: velvetmouse
Recipient: serpentpixie
Rating: PG
Character(s): MWPP & Co.
Warnings: N/A
Summary: You know the saying "For want of a nail, a kingdom was lost"? Well, this is like that. Only different.
Author's Notes: To my dear recipient: Well, you asked for "something

Comments

[such_heights]

*beams* This is absolutely wonderful! What a charming story, and I adore all of the students introduced here, and how you brought them all to life so well. And many, many kudos for a Peter with a personality, I really liked how you wrote him and Remus here. Your Lily is delightful, too.

Thanks for brightening up my evening!

[serpentpixie]

Ohhhhh, how utterly wonderful! This is cute and charming and amusing and brilliant! The chain of events is so concise and so fantastically written. I really adore how this feels like just-one-day in an entire universe, with that complex interplay of relationships that humankind is. It's wonderful.

You have made an icy winters night so much better. Thank you!

[snorkackcatcher]

Hilarious -- I was wondering why they didn't simply get them from the store cupboard! And very nice to see the Severus and Lily friendship actually working for a change, as it must have done. :)

[moonwatchers]

Editor's choice! I love this!

[chiralove]

Fabulous - just charming! I love all of the kerfuffle over the lacewings and everything! Just a great story ... thanks so much, mystery author!