Oh gosh. This is a fantastic look at what could have/might have/probably did happen that terrible day that Voldemort found the Potters. Wow! Well done!
Oh, wow. This is really good. Molly of course would want to take Remus in because of his loneliness, and little Bill was adorable. Then you just smack us in the gut with that ending scene, Peter all twitchy and Remus with absolutely no idea of what is about to happen...incredible.
You know that feeling you have when something awful happens to you--how could I have been doing such ordinary things so calmly just a few minutes ago? Yikes. *shivers* Thanks for reading! M.
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(I love almost-11 yr old Bill!)
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