Halloween Gift for Kirasha

Oct 31, 2012 12:07


Gift for: kirasha

From: magnetic_pole

Title: Cold Front
Characters: Remus Lupin, Peter Pettigrew
Rating: PG
Summary: The Burrow is warm, but outside a storm is coming.

October 31, 1981: an ordinary day, or it would have been... )

!2012, ^peter pettigrew, ^remus lupin, *magnetic_pole, #gen, rating: pg

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unseen1969 October 31 2012, 17:13:17 UTC
Oh gosh. This is a fantastic look at what could have/might have/probably did happen that terrible day that Voldemort found the Potters. Wow! Well done!

(I love almost-11 yr old Bill!)

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magnetic_pole November 3 2012, 18:32:08 UTC
I love it that you know Bill is almost-11! (I had to look him up and do the math.) Thanks so much for reading! M.

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unseen1969 November 3 2012, 23:20:43 UTC
I love Bill to death! :-D

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lordes October 31 2012, 17:15:33 UTC
;__; oh.

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magnetic_pole November 3 2012, 18:32:20 UTC
Thanks for reading! M.

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strawberry_kait October 31 2012, 17:30:45 UTC
I really like these stories that glimpse the Marauders' lives before everything went to Hell in a hand basket. Nicely done! Happy Halloween!

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magnetic_pole November 3 2012, 18:33:19 UTC
It's such a compelling back story, isn't it? Happy Halloween to you, too! M.

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stgulik October 31 2012, 18:01:35 UTC
A cold front, indeed. Got a little shiver at the end there. Good fic.

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magnetic_pole November 3 2012, 18:33:46 UTC
Thanks. Happy autumn! M.

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bluemermaid October 31 2012, 18:33:05 UTC
Oh, wow. This is really good. Molly of course would want to take Remus in because of his loneliness, and little Bill was adorable. Then you just smack us in the gut with that ending scene, Peter all twitchy and Remus with absolutely no idea of what is about to happen...incredible.

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magnetic_pole November 3 2012, 18:37:00 UTC
You know that feeling you have when something awful happens to you--how could I have been doing such ordinary things so calmly just a few minutes ago? Yikes. *shivers* Thanks for reading! M.

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