Gift Drabble for pandora_nervosa

Oct 31, 2004 15:45

pandora_nervosa requested SS/HG porn, with Severus as the Dominant and Hermione as the Submissive. Well, dearest K, I try like hell to spin porn out my fingers, and it always comes out not quite what I hoped for. ;P I do hope you like it.

Title:Through The Cloak
Rating: R
Author: gracelynn

Through The Cloak )

*gracelynn, ^severus snape/hermione granger, rating: r, !2004, #het

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mchoneygoose October 31 2004, 21:17:59 UTC
*gulp*

Fantastic. Fanfuckingtastic.

*gulp*

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gracelynn November 1 2004, 03:25:58 UTC
Aww! Thank you, Ira!! Glad you liked it! And thanks for starting this thing! It's fantastic!

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pandora_nervosa October 31 2004, 21:20:55 UTC
Oh B! It's beautiful! So lyrical and fluid. My favorite line:

A low rumble comes from under the cloak and the ancient ivy winds around the blue-veined wrists, a marble canvas of thrumming desire bound to the deep quiet of decay.

::hugs you::

I love it! Adds to memories right now...lol.

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gracelynn November 1 2004, 03:27:40 UTC
*huge sigh of relief*

I'm sooooo glad you like it, K!! I was worried there. My damned fingers just won't type out good porn. I try for erotica and end up with metaphors. ;P

(((((hugs)))))

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hawklaw October 31 2004, 21:35:36 UTC
Oh, so hauntingly sensual and beautiful! Just lovely, my love. Absolutely wonderful.

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gracelynn November 1 2004, 03:28:20 UTC
Thank you, sweet thang!!! *licklick*

*loves*

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rillathegrape October 31 2004, 21:54:31 UTC
Oh, sweets, you already know what I think, but gah. Stunning. Exquisite. I would sell my soul for an ounce of your talent, love. Perfect.

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gracelynn November 1 2004, 03:31:35 UTC
You are such a silly little chicken.

But you're MY Soul Chicken!!

Thank you, babe, but you know you have every bit as much talent as I!!! You're the rarest writer bird out there, love...quantitiy AND quality!! (Not to mention I often want to slap you silly for being able to write such awe-inspiring erotica, far more than a flash of hormone and sweaty skin)

But, since you are my soul chicken and I love you so, that feeling quickly passes. ;P

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shadowycat October 31 2004, 21:58:10 UTC
You write the classiest porn, my dear. Fantastic!

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gracelynn November 1 2004, 03:33:50 UTC
Thanks!

(could that even be considered porn, though?? LOL)

I'm so glad you liked it! I was considering burning some Harlequinns on a sacred altar and begging the porn nymphs to give me SOMETHING. I try for porn and metaphors come out. It's unseemly. ;P

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