Halloween Gift for Goddess47

Oct 31, 2017 08:38


Gift for: goddess47

From: torino10154

Title: Halloween Blessing
Pairing: Severus/Harry
Rating: PG
Disclaimer: Not mine. Based on characters from the Harry Potter book series.
Summary: The ones who love us never really leave us.
Notes: Thrilled to write for you, goddess47! Thanks to gryffindorj and
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!2017, ^severus snape/harry potter, *torino10154, #slash, rating: pg

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leontinabowie October 31 2017, 17:53:24 UTC
Very cute :)

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Halloween Blessing torino10154 December 2 2017, 15:35:47 UTC
Thank you!

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goddess47 November 1 2017, 00:21:19 UTC
How sweet! And a dog and wolf playing together...

So much in so few words! Nicely done and many thanks!

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Halloween Blessing torino10154 December 2 2017, 15:36:30 UTC
Thanks so much, hon. Glad you enjoyed it. :)

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kellychambliss November 1 2017, 03:07:44 UTC
You do a fine job with both their voices; I can just hear them.

The full moon turned his face a bluish-white, that softened and smoothed the deep lines and severe edges, making him look both younger and kinder.

Or maybe that was the alcohol and Harry's smitten heart.

Great lines -- hilarious and sweet.

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Halloween Blessing torino10154 December 2 2017, 15:37:00 UTC
Thanks so much! Thrilled it worked for you.

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rzzmg November 1 2017, 05:29:21 UTC
This was lovely! The inclusion of the playful wolf and the dog there at the end, who were metaphors for Sirius and Remus (who I'm guessing are dead in this A/U), lending Harry their courage so he could try for something with Severus was beautiful!

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Halloween Blessing torino10154 December 2 2017, 15:38:31 UTC
Thank you! Remus and Sirius were also listed as character options so I decided to include the nod to them. Glad you liked it.

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Halloween Blessing koshweasley November 4 2017, 22:52:43 UTC
Such a wonderful moment for the pair...two pairs. And you've painted it beautifully. Well done.

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Re: Halloween Blessing torino10154 December 2 2017, 15:38:55 UTC
Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it.

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