Halloween Gift for Gelsey

[hphalloween_mod]

Gift for: gelsey

From: pauraque

Title: The Last Year
Character: Luna
Rating: G
Summary: The thestrals look happier than usual.
Notes: Happy Halloween, Gelsey!

Comments

[enchanted_jae]

Wonderful!

[pauraque]

Thanks!

[kellychambliss]

Fabulous. Beautifully structured, with those parallel, powerful single lines. The balance is excellent: the plot and characterization distilled in essence in two brief phrasings. The details are so vividly-realized, with wonderful precise lines like this one: Leaves twirl about them in the September breeze- red, orange, yellow, pale green- like bits of rainbow set against their night-black skin. So much story and character come through in only 200 words (You capture Luna perfectly, her perceptions slightly askew but all the more spot-on for that). Really well done.

[pauraque]

Again, thank you!

[adafrog]

Very nice.

[pauraque]

Thanks!

[rzzmg]

Oh, this was SO LOVELY! Luna won't be alone any longer, and neither will the thestrals. So much hope in this short drabble! Much love for it!!!

[pauraque]

Thanks, glad you enjoyed!

[dreamy_dragon73]

I love the similarity between the visibility of the Thestrals and Luna. Fantastic drabble!

[pauraque]

Thank you! It took me a while to come up with the idea, but once I did I admit I was proud of it. ;)