Halloween Gift for HikariEvandar

Oct 30, 2017 23:10


Gift for: hikarievandar

From: snax0

Title: Wait For It
Characters: Regulus Black, Sirius Black.
Rating: G.
Warnings: Ghosts, Horror.
Summary: Regulus wakes to the same noise every night.
Notes: Personally, I see this taking place pre-Hogwarts, but you can think whatever. Thank you to A. for the beta, and hikarievandar for the lovely prompts. Hope you like it!

Happy Halloween! )

^regulus black, *snax0, !2017, ^sirius black, rating: g, #gen

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digthewriter October 31 2017, 04:20:32 UTC
oh, absolutely loved this.

He tenses, waits for it to start, and it does; a familiar voice coming from an unknown figure. He pulls the blanket around him, tries not to be scared, but then-...

GREAT JOB.

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snax0 November 2 2017, 09:42:12 UTC
Thank you!

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re: Wait for It acciochocolate October 31 2017, 06:14:59 UTC
Oh, poor Regulus! Yes, pre-Hogwarts seems right. :)

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ravenclawsquill October 31 2017, 06:30:05 UTC
This is fabulously creepy from start to finish!

You build the suspense wonderfully throughout the drabble - my anticipation was building at the same pace as Regulus’s fear - and I love how he runs to Sirius for safety.

Great drabble!

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snax0 November 2 2017, 09:47:27 UTC
Thank you! I'm glad you thought so, and I'm glad I got the suspense right.

Thanks for reading!

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ragdoll October 31 2017, 07:38:10 UTC
Oh wow, that was fantastic. Creepy AF and especially brilliant that you were able to build that up in all of 200 words. Bravo!

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snax0 November 2 2017, 09:52:43 UTC
Thank you!

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leontinabowie October 31 2017, 10:15:37 UTC
This was great! So creepy :D

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snax0 November 2 2017, 09:52:59 UTC
Thank you!

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