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Halloween Gift for Hannelore

Oct 31, 2015 09:43

Gift for: _hannelore

From: flipflop_diva

Title: Today, I Walk Within
Characters: Neville Longbottom. Mention of Pomona Sprout.
Rating: G
Summary: Neville Longbottom hated venturing into the Forbidden Forest. But on All Hallow's Eve, he would make an exception.
Notes: Thank you to the mods for hosting this awesome fest! It's one of my favorites of every year, and I get ( Read more... )

!2015, *flipflop_diva, ^neville longbottom, rating: g, #gen

Comments 22

re: Today, I Walk Within vaysh October 31 2015, 13:53:46 UTC

Wow. That is so well done. I love the built-up of tension, and the atmosphere you create for the Forbidden Forest (I was very reminded of Tolkien's Old Forest in the Lord of the Rings). The resolution and the last line are wonderful.

lightofdaye October 31 2015, 13:57:32 UTC

Lovely characterisation and a good pay off at the end there.

torino10154 October 31 2015, 14:45:38 UTC

Aw, this made me teary. So lovely. Well done.

capitu October 31 2015, 14:50:21 UTC

That was lovely and touching. Beautiful. <3

luvscharlie October 31 2015, 15:34:20 UTC

*sobs*

Oh how beautifully done.

*pets Neville*