Halloween Gift for inamac

Oct 31, 2014 06:14


Gift for: inamac

From: hikarievandar

Title: Absence
Characters: Tom Riddle, Founders
Rating: G
Summary: The Founders sealed the wards with their deaths, but one of them is missing. Tom finds Hogwarts’ weakness.
Notes: Thanks, as always, go to S for the beta. I hope you enjoy this, inamac. I loved your prompt and I really enjoyed working on it.

Happy Halloween )

*hikarievandar, !2014, rating: g, ^founders, ^tom riddle jr, #gen

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kellychambliss November 1 2014, 01:53:42 UTC
Excellent! I really like this. I'm a sucker for inventive and creative depictions of magic, and you've created the perfect atmospheric scenario here. These tombs are my head canon now.

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hikarievandar November 21 2014, 21:01:25 UTC
Thank you! I'm so glad you liked it.

The tombs are my headcanon, actually, and I really enjoyed being able to convert others explore that a little bit more. And, of course, I love to think that there's a lot more to Hogwarts, the Founders, and magic than what we were shown in the books.

P.S. Your icon is glorious <3

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smallbrownfrog November 1 2014, 02:09:53 UTC
"dig like fangs into his palms"

Ooh, such wonderful language and such a moody, evocative feel.

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hikarievandar November 21 2014, 20:59:46 UTC
Thank you <3 I'm glad you liked it

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cranky__crocus November 1 2014, 04:53:15 UTC
Oooh I love this creative use of magic and wards. I can very much see this being a thing at Hogwarts, that the Founders leave one additional thing with their deaths. Of course Helga's would be love; I wonder if Rowena's is studiousness and Godric's courage (which are both very useful come exam time, along with the feeling of being loved). Really well done and well written.

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hikarievandar November 21 2014, 21:04:59 UTC
Thank you! <3 I love to think that there's a lot more to Hogwarts, the Founders, and magic than what we're shown in the books, and this managed to explore that a little bit. It was really fun to come up with, and quite a challenge to fit it into 200 words!

Godric's is sacrifice - the whole thing about being buried on Hogwarts' grounds and sealing the wards with their deaths was his idea - and Rowena's is secrecy. Salazar was supposed to be longevity, which is the implied weakness: because he wasn't buried in his tomb, the wards can fail.

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cranky__crocus November 21 2014, 21:09:01 UTC
Oh, that is stunning, truly! It's very intricate and well thought out; I can see why it was a challenge to fit it into 200 words! If you ever write a long fanfic with the same idea be sure to send a link my way. ;D I can see that you would explore it beautifully with more words as well.

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dexstarr November 2 2014, 03:21:38 UTC
Verrrry interesting! I could see a lot more springing from this drabble. Nice job.

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hikarievandar November 21 2014, 20:59:28 UTC
Thank you! I'm glad you liked it. It was certainly quite difficult wrestling this down to 200 words - it didn't feel like quite enough space to explore at times.

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nimrod_9 November 3 2014, 19:07:27 UTC
Very cool!

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hikarievandar November 21 2014, 20:51:12 UTC
Thanks!

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