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jellybean_slash: "What Happens in the Darkness" (PP/HG, NC-17)

Mar 24, 2007 19:42

Author: jellybean_slash
Title: What Happens in the Darkness
Rating: NC-17
Prompt: #20, "Lights out"
Date: 03/24/07
Summary: The jut of her hips, every feminine curve of her body, sent Hermione spiralling back in time.
Pairing: PP/HG
Word Count: 1,156
Warnings: Femmeslash.
Notes: Written for blonde_cecile, who requested "Pansy/Hermione vampire bloodplay." Pretty light on the ( Read more... )

03/24/07, jellybean_slash

Comments 16

crucio_4_coffee March 25 2007, 02:27:34 UTC

OMG Pansy/Hermione = femslash OTP! *loves*

And the last line? Yes!

formalizing March 25 2007, 02:30:55 UTC

*Giggles* I'm so glad you liked it! I was totally nervous about writing femmeslash. Heh.

*Loves on you for commenting!*

acidpop25 March 25 2007, 06:29:47 UTC

Mrowww. Very nice. It's not a pair I've ever been that sold on, but you wrote it so well, it has a really great sense of atmosphere to it.

formalizing March 26 2007, 23:41:35 UTC

Hee, m'glad you liked it! I wasn't so sure I could write it, but the fact that people like it really brings back a little of my confidence.

I'm so happy to be back writing Harry Potter. I have no idea how I could ever have left. Ever.

acidpop25 March 27 2007, 18:32:11 UTC

Me either.

diagonalist March 25 2007, 08:34:53 UTC

*fans self*

Whoohoo! Oh, the things you do to me! Excellent; I totally don't believe this is your first shot at girl on girl porn. You have a secret stash somewhere, don't you?

Loved, loved the way you showed Hermione being thoroughly fucked up by the war, and all the things she has that aren't enough.

Plus, extremely hot. Extremely. Pant-melting hot.

formalizing March 26 2007, 23:38:59 UTC

It is my first! And as you can see, I cleverly found ways around my issues with it. *Grin*

*Tackleglomp* Love you, kitty! Thank you for the comment!

blonde_cecile March 25 2007, 21:54:20 UTC

OMG! It's FANTASTIC! This narrative, this post-war universe you've created.... This is what fanfic is all about. The smuttiness is awesome and intense, but the setup is what makes it really stand out. I do believe this is my favorite new Pansy/Hermione fic. It's so much more than I could have even imagined. *squeeeeee*

Thankyouthankyouthankyou. I love it madly. GREAT job. :D

blonde_cecile March 26 2007, 17:58:20 UTC

I recorded it. :D Mind if I post it to my journal?

formalizing March 26 2007, 20:02:58 UTC

No, no, go right ahead! I wrote it for you, after all. ^_^

formalizing March 26 2007, 20:04:47 UTC

Awwwwwwwwww! You're such a sweetheart! And I'm so, so, so glad you liked it! I had never written the pairing (or any femmeslash, really) before, so you liking it means a lot!

*HUGS* Thank you, honey!

lightbird777 March 26 2007, 22:38:58 UTC

Now this is not a pairing you see everyday. Fantastic job! I'll be looking for more of your writing.

formalizing March 26 2007, 23:36:11 UTC

*Blush* Thank you! I'm so glad you liked it. =)