how the west ward was won

Jan 23, 2015 19:30

►recipient: cupofteas
►title: how the west ward was won
►pairing: baekhyun/kyungsoo hinted!minseok/luhan
rating: pg-13
►word count: 11.8k
►warnings: copious amounts of dumbness and cameos from other groups, brief mention of high school frottage, Dark Curses
►summary: Baekhyun finds many creative ways to end up on a hospital bed in the West Ward of St. Mungo ( Read more... )

pair:xiumin/luhan, pair:baekhyun/do, char:baekhyun, char:xiumin, rating:pg13, fic:round1, char:luhan, char:do

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berryboys January 23 2015, 22:37:45 UTC
I'm getting all kinds of feelings after imagining Kyungsoo as a Mediwizard, and they're all too bad for mi sanity. This is so so so good! I love how you developed Kyungsoo's feelings and how Baekhyun, dumb and cute, keeps coming up with worse ideas every time (and meanwhile Kyungsoo is like 'nah, healed now, I'm out'). Well, he and half of the characters helping him to get Kyungsoo back. The ideas are hilarious, like the bludger one, because seriously??? He let a bludger hit him in the face?? lol That alone made him worth of forgiveness, poor crazy boy!

It was super interesting reading about St. Mungo, I wish there were more of this. The side characters are <3 too (especially Sehun)!

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aprilclash February 2 2015, 20:41:56 UTC
Kyungsoo as a Mediwizard is bad for my sanity!!!
And yes, Baek let a Bludger hit him. Yes, he's dumb. Yes, Kyungsoo totally fell for his dumb.
I'm sorry, no planned sequel for this one :( But thank you so much for your lovely comment <3

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exobubz January 25 2015, 04:28:09 UTC
This. fic. though. got. my. sh*ttin'. bricks. of. feelings. out. my. ass ( ... )

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aprilclash February 16 2015, 01:39:53 UTC
Well, there's very little I can say to answer this message properly. I'm extremely glad you liked it so much, look, I don't even know how can I thank you for such a passionate comment.
I really thought I hadn't done a good job in portraying Mediwizard Kyungsoo and writing this fic, so thank you very very very much <3

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januarys_lovers January 26 2015, 09:03:29 UTC
I love this story so much?? It feels so... I don't know, it feels so real and there are so many details, so many things you added that make it even more enjoyable. I love that there are plenty of characters but that each one of them is here for a reason and that their personalities are well defined despite them being only secondary characters. I loved your Kyungsoo. Kyungsoo helping but groaning and being grumpy is practically canon and it was great to read him angry at Baekhyun when inside, he's really drooling over him. I loved your plot. And the death eater at the end ;; how you handled all those details and ... /sighs consider me a true fan!

You said it was a challenge for you to write fluffy baeksoo but damn I have to assure you you did great!!!! It was such a nice reading, you have a way of writing that makes the story comes to life and it's so great!!

(And also sehun might be my favorite character here, he's just... /sighs)

thank you for writing this ♡

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brittlepin January 27 2015, 05:52:04 UTC
He looks too small for all the crowd outside the door and yet too big and bright for the white, aseptic room. - this can hold so aptly for his stage presence as well, but I will keep that tucked to the side for a later time and date.

It’s a little hoarse, a little rough, unpolished. - already fanning myself. not good. not good. b/c there are so many more hints dropped like bombs all over the fic, and if this got me hot and ready, the others ...

he goes back to bully the new trainee healers, Kim and Oh, folding away his feelings for Baekhyun and putting them to sleep exactly where they belong: in the chest of Hogwarts memories and silly regrets, things that should’ve been long forgotten but that sometimes come back to haunt him in the form of his former boyfriend suddenly appearing at his workplace and tearing apart Kyungsoo’s peaceful life. - this whole para has been marked my favourite! The maknae line fits almost everywhere together as a unit and seeing them as medical trainees was- wow! I just wanted to grab and cuddle and ( ... )

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aprilclash February 8 2015, 03:10:20 UTC
Well, thank you so much for this lovely comment, you even said it was your favourite ;////; me is happiest!
I'd like to take all the glory and the blame for this fic, but I must admit that the original prompt was quite endearing, and I really enjoyed so much writing it! Mediwizard Kyungsoo wasn't difficult to write, but writing Baeksoo was and that's why I'm so happy if you thought this was a good fic.
I especially loved writing all the supporting characters, especially Sehun.
AND A LOT OF STARS TO YOU FOR NOTICING THAT DETAIL ABOUT BAEK AND STAGE PRESENCE that's exactly what i was thinking about when I wrote it!!!

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design_ok January 30 2015, 15:23:39 UTC
this should NOT have ended so soon *INSERTS LONG WHINE*
it's just soooo adorable & lovely & sweet & everything? ;ldgkld;fg

grumpy Soo /wails/ he's just soooo trying to fight against his feelings lol all this grumbles and grunts, like please bb don't deny you want you ex back lol /territorial Kyungso/ LE GASP

and Baekhyun....BAEK BABY the STAR uwu still reckless and protetive and silly and loving
the reference about crows instead of owls LOL s';dlgdf

ofc maknae line and all the gang, those shits, deatheater was a nice cliffhanger, i was holding my breath when that scene happened.
Humor is top notch, I loved it all!

I have a vague idea of how initial prompt was but you've done one amazing job! BaekSoo is ♡ , fluffy BaekSoo even more ♡ and in HP verse - like whole lot more ♡ ♡

thank you for writing such a lovely and enjoyable story!

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aprilclash February 8 2015, 03:06:13 UTC
Your opinion means so much to me ;; and ofc you would love Baek baby our silly star <3

/showers you with love/

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