technical faults

[exolliarmus]

►recipient: chocolaytemilk
►title: technical faults
►pairing: baekhyun/chanyeol
rating: pg-13
►word count: 11805
►warnings: Romance, slight!angst, attempted comedy, Slight Broken!Chanbaek
►summary: Blood purity made all the difference, Baekhyun picked a path, and Chanyeol was a little too late.
►author's notes: I only meant to make it slight angst, but I think I

Comments

[baekfics]

My new favorite! I LOVE EVERYTHING!! BLESS YOU WRITER.

BaekYeol feels + HP! OMG!!!
This is super heart heart love love ^^

[bookishvice]

This was really well done! I almost wish there had been a bit more angst, but I loved it as is. Baek really did bring on their heartache for freaking out, and then poor Chanyeol not understanding why ;; I was about to adk what happened to the cat when it got resolved in the last scene :D
Ps: Sexy times against a bookshelf A+++++++

[exobubz]

Aw, maaaaaan, i had so much angst planned, like my prompt was very open and i wasl ike yeah i can do this and this and this and this and smut and a little bit of action and jealousy and and and and and and I PROCRASTINATED AND RAN OUT OF TIME ;;;;;;;

It's a sad day when i can't write a quidditch match gone wrong, chanyeol being hexed, injured, and them making up and having crazy doodlies in the dormies, ya know.

But thank you for the comment haha <333 much love

[bookishvice]

Procrastination slays us all ;;;; But you did a good job anyways! That's what's important :D

crazy doodlies in the dormies
LOL <333

[baekfics]

I want to comment further for this is one of my favorite fics from this exchnge

[exobubz]

KISSES YOU ON THE HEAD

Thank you so much for the comment and love, boo ;3; ♥♥♥ im very very very happy that you enjoyed this and even had your own favorite parts (and commented TWIICIEEEE) thank you very very much :^ ♥

[brittlepin]

Dude! It is PERFECT the way it is! I dunno if the recipient doesn't like angst or something, but at least it worked towards a happier ending, hehe. I really liked it a lot, enjoyed it and seeing assertive Chanyeol was kind of hot.

The little hints dropped here and there about their intimacy were hotter than any intimacy that could have been added tbh, so it's another aspect I really liked haha.
“I accept your apology, Byun, now be a good Gryffindor, wrap your little legs around me and keep quiet.” I can't- nope- so done- so done

[exobubz]

HI! First, thanks for the comment and the love haha

2nd.
okay, i had alot of things planned for this fic, but you know, time and writing aren't always the best of buddies ;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;
minah was (or supposed to be until i took a 180* plot change) chanyeol's ex (but good terms ex etc) and when baekhyun went over to his house over the summer, pcy introduced him as a friend not only to his family but to her
------i mentioned the song Title by meghan trainor in my a/n and the lyrics are : "baby, dont call me a friend, if i hear that word again, you might never see get a chance to see me naked in your bed"-----aka my original inspiration orz

but like i said, sad times when i cant do everything i original wanted lol :---) i had to change the plot and insert one that made sense but more time efficient ((idk whether that's skill or procastination at its best))

but thank you for you comment, agian :DDDDDD ♥

LOVE LOVE YOU AUTHORNIM

[amiyourprincess]

Excuse me but I think we are missing the point here: MERMAID TEARS.

CB is love but hello TEMPORALIS AMNESIA WAS BRILLIANT. And just about everything that Jongdae discussed about it was captivating and WOW. The explanation of the theory was perfect, "You allow a moment for yourself to forget so that in the next, it’ll be easier to cope" But then again, "It is temporary after all". I bow to this concept too much.

can't help but comment over hinted!hunhan //SQUEALS//

I'm gonna wait for the sequel //wink wink//

See I'm about to quote too much of this but I decided to stop. Lol.

One last thing authornim, how did they get the tears?

Re: LOVE LOVE YOU AUTHORNIM

[exobubz]

stOP IT YOU

Re: LOVE LOVE YOU AUTHORNIM

[amiyourprincess]

But I was serious with my last questioooooon!!!!

One last thing authornim, how did they get the tears?

Answer it. AHIHI.