This fic was absolute LOVE! From the beginning to end! :D
I loved chingu line, & I loved Jongdae, & I absolutely LOVED Joonmyun! Since we were looking at the Slytherin prefect through Jongdae's love-struck eyes, he was even more precious and adorable and just so frikking perfect, you feel me? Jongup my precious made a cameo I'm screaming welp!!!!
I wish I'd live commented or something because there were parts that had me really cracking up xD Chanyeol's master plan threw me off (IT WAS GOLD I TELL YOU. expose this boy to more muggle things!!!) and Jongdae's resigned acceptance of it was soooo x'D There are no words for it xD So I express through these weird faces OTL
"Why they never listen to Kyungsoo, who is obviously the only smart one among them, is beyond him." - this moment of dawning was so funny. Kyungsoo's entire's presence/existence was such a stabilizing factor against everyone's else loud one xD
( ... )
I have a very important thing to say: WHY DOESN'T ANYONE PUNCH BAEKHYUN IN THE FACE. Hold me back or I will, I swear. I was hoping Kyungsoo was the one to be helpful at last, but it was great to see how stupid the chingu line became before that. I was cackling at the image of them making students dance while Jongdae sings. I'm so glad they didn't use this as the plan though, because I fear Junmyeon could have run away forever lol. I'm a sucker for this kind of dynamics, Prefect vs trouble maker, and Suchen fits that so well that I ;; , and the fic is this mixture of funny and cute (and the urge to punch Baekhyun, sorry), perfect. One of my fav moments is Jongdae discovering Junmyeon is blonde, damn I understand him so well xDD and the letter hit me so hard - he souldn't be allowed to be this cute: It’s not a distraction, I promise. Please don’t be worried! Not! Allowed!
Can you please kiss it better? OMGGGG. I could kiss you. I could have read this fic for an eternity, it was THAT GOOD. Everything with the chingu line, and Park Rocket (*this is me dying again just thinking about it), and fed-up Baekhyun, and Kyungsoo's-I can picture it- mental sighs. So much help, but Jongdae is just a Doll! And so darn cute. Should I mention Junmyeon now?! Blonde Junmyeon and his sad smiles of disappointment every time Jongdae did something to lose house points. Awwwakwjelja -was me on each occasion.
“Junmyeon’s tacky, he’ll love it.” I almost lost it here. “Were we in the same place? Chanyeol, that kid threw up over the love of my life. I think it went awful.” And here "We may be Gryffindors but he’s really one to slither in, if you know what I mean.” And Here!!
THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR TAKING MY PROMPT, YOU BEAUTIFUL HUMAN BEING.
I loved everything about it. ;w; Baek is a dick and I love it, Chanyeol is dumb and I love it, and Kyungsoo is Kyungsoo and I love it. JONGDAE WAS ABSOLUTELY ADORABLE IN THIS, I really really loved the way you portrayed him! Junmyeon is perf as usual LOL
Really loved this ! Amazing story and was actually looking forward to this when i saw this prompt being taken. The way you described them was really flowing with the plot and the absence of Jongdae's voice is the screaming factor that made him confess. the paradox though XD .. Junmyeon is just wonderful here. brilliant story! Thank you for this
Comments 8
I loved chingu line, & I loved Jongdae, & I absolutely LOVED Joonmyun!
Since we were looking at the Slytherin prefect through Jongdae's love-struck eyes, he was even more precious and adorable and just so frikking perfect, you feel me?
Jongup my precious made a cameo I'm screaming welp!!!!
I wish I'd live commented or something because there were parts that had me really cracking up xD
Chanyeol's master plan threw me off (IT WAS GOLD I TELL YOU. expose this boy to more muggle things!!!) and Jongdae's resigned acceptance of it was soooo x'D
There are no words for it xD So I express through these weird faces OTL
"Why they never listen to Kyungsoo, who is obviously the only smart one among them, is beyond him." - this moment of dawning was so funny. Kyungsoo's entire's presence/existence was such a stabilizing factor against everyone's else loud one xD ( ... )
Reply
I'm a sucker for this kind of dynamics, Prefect vs trouble maker, and Suchen fits that so well that I ;; , and the fic is this mixture of funny and cute (and the urge to punch Baekhyun, sorry), perfect. One of my fav moments is Jongdae discovering Junmyeon is blonde, damn I understand him so well xDD and the letter hit me so hard - he souldn't be allowed to be this cute: It’s not a distraction, I promise. Please don’t be worried! Not! Allowed!
Reply
“Junmyeon’s tacky, he’ll love it.” I almost lost it here.
“Were we in the same place? Chanyeol, that kid threw up over the love of my life. I think it went awful.” And here
"We may be Gryffindors but he’s really one to slither in, if you know what I mean.” And Here!!
Loved this so much. wow. <3
Reply
I loved everything about it. ;w; Baek is a dick and I love it, Chanyeol is dumb and I love it, and Kyungsoo is Kyungsoo and I love it. JONGDAE WAS ABSOLUTELY ADORABLE IN THIS, I really really loved the way you portrayed him! Junmyeon is perf as usual LOL
You made my day, thank you for writing this fic!
Reply
Reply
Leave a comment