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FIC: Casualties [Albus/Scorpius - PG]

Dec 22, 2011 17:43

Author: Anonymous
Title: Casualties
Characters/Pairings: Albus/Scorpius, Lily/OMC, Lorcan, Lysander
Rating: PG
Warnings: slash
Word Count: 2,037
Prompt: 216 - Albus/Scorpius, Scorpius/Rose, and/or various nextgen pairings (as the author feels is appropriate. not picky here). When the Dark Lord rises again, old family history rises to the ( Read more... )

rating: pg, pairing: albus/scorpius, !winter2011, !round5, slash, fic

Comments 10

auselysium December 23 2011, 18:16:24 UTC

Ooo....I really like this. I haven't read any post-gen fics where they are the grownups and I love it. I especially liked the part about Liky. This would be a great scenario to continue!!!

alley_skywalker January 1 2012, 23:39:04 UTC

I'm glad you liked it :) I found the prompt really interesting in the sense that I find the idea of a nextgen war appealing :)

badjujuboo December 26 2011, 22:12:44 UTC

LOVE THIS! I do believe I need more! What happens during the war? Does Lily manage to stay safe?

I love love LOVE the detail in this, the background without making it BANG in your face, just winds you through what we have to know about what is going on. The names are fantastic too.

alley_skywalker January 1 2012, 23:40:41 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad the background was not overbearing. I needed it to be there, obviously, to explain what was going on but I'm glad it worked organically with the rest of the fic.

thilia December 27 2011, 09:29:30 UTC

I absolutely adored this! And like the previous commenters said; it shows so much promise and there should be more! :)

I really liked ALL your characters, and... I don't know what else to say, cause I honestly just loved everything.

<333

alley_skywalker January 1 2012, 23:42:42 UTC

So very glad you liked it :) I do think this is an interesting concept and I would like to play with it a little further perhaps at some point.

jargonelle December 30 2011, 02:58:45 UTC

This is just so intriguing and these glimpses paint such a vivid picture. I love Lysander looking like Luna. I love the details of Lily's life. I love that last line.

And I really, really now want to know how it all plays out between Lily, James and Albus. ;)

alley_skywalker January 1 2012, 23:44:53 UTC

Thank you! I'm very glad you enjoyed it! I honestly like the Lily I've written here, maybe I should keep her in my head like that :)

ura_hd January 1 2012, 03:57:52 UTC

How very sad... Great story!

alley_skywalker January 1 2012, 23:46:15 UTC

Thank you, I'm glad you liked it :)