FIC: I Never Wanted Anything From You, Except Everything You Had [Harry, Lily - PG]

Dec 14, 2011 20:16

Author: Anonymous
Title: I Never Wanted Anything From You, Except Everything You Had
Characters/Pairings: Harry, Lily Luna
Rating: PG
Warnings: None, really...I don't even think there's any swearing. Crappy father/daughter relationship and teen pregnancy
Word Count: 2700-ish
Prompt: 5. Harry struggles with being a parent. (submitted by tabitha666)
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rating: pg, character: lily luna, character: harry, gen, !winter2011, !round5, fic

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yerawizardamber January 2 2012, 23:23:01 UTC
I'm so glad you liked it!! I hope I did your prompt well :)

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icicle33 December 17 2011, 05:15:49 UTC
This was great. It was really emotional and angsty. I really felt for poor Harry, who had no idea he had already lost his little girl. I also really liked the Scorpius/Lily side pairing.

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yerawizardamber January 2 2012, 23:23:34 UTC
Thank you :) I love the idea of Malfoy/Potter in more than just H/D. =D

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thilia December 17 2011, 23:46:28 UTC
Awww! I was really hoping they'd end up being okay, but I guess... not. Which was perfect cause it's angsty and ♥

In my "universe", Harry and Lily always have a pretty great relationship, so it was really interesting to see this point of view - which also makes a lot of sense :) I really liked your portrayal of Harry; being awkward around girls and not knowing what to say, and stuff.

Loved it!

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yerawizardamber January 2 2012, 23:25:59 UTC
My universe and your universe overlap. :) I have always pictured Harry and Lily as having a good relationship as well, so it was strange/challenging/slightly fun to write it this way. Thanks for the nice comment!

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secretsalex December 25 2011, 14:16:39 UTC
*wanders in, glances at comments* I told you Lily/Scorp was the way to go here. :P

You already know I love this fic, dear. Poor Harry. Poor Lily. Oh, le trauma!

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yerawizardamber January 2 2012, 23:27:02 UTC
Thank you, bebe :) Lily/Scorp was definitely the way to go! Now to work on a sequel ;)
And thanks for the beta!!

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phantompopcorn January 12 2012, 04:04:55 UTC
Daddy!Harry is always portrayed as this wonderful father and it is refreshing to see another side to this. Fathers and daughters don't always get along, do they? A great read and I'd love to see the sequel!

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