Gift for elektra30!

Mar 02, 2011 18:28

Recipient: elektra30
Author: slythrngodss
Title: Shards
Pairing: Harry/Ginny
Rating: G
Warnings: angst (but is that really a warning at emofest?)
Word Count: 1, 818
Summary: It’s not like it’s a big thing, they make it through every day life just fine, the problem is that they make it through every day life just fine.
Notes: Based on the prompt: "Relationships are like ( Read more... )

!round4, het, pairing: harry/ginny, rating: g, fic, !valentine2011

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alley_skywalker March 2 2011, 23:21:39 UTC
I like how simple and normal this seems. How it's just an average summer day at home - parents work, children play. Nothing seems to be wrong at all. Except it's all very wrong underneath. Great fic :)

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elektra30 March 3 2011, 04:40:15 UTC
In silence, at least, they were friends.

This line probably sums up the whole feeling of their relationship. Thank you so much for writing this fic, and great use of the prompt! I love how everything seems like a normal day but you've brought out all the dysfunctionality in subtle ways. They can't even be bothered to sweep it all under the carpet, it's just understood, which is painfully disturbing.

Well done!

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thilia March 9 2011, 18:23:04 UTC
I'm not a Harry/Ginny fan at all, but this was rather lovely, especially with the inclusion of the kids - something I always love :)

I like the normality of this little scene, and like elektra30, I have to quote, "In silence, at least, they were friends." because that really does reflect the entire "feeling" of the fic :) The emoness was subtle but it was undoubtedly present.

I really enjoyed this; it was really well-written! :)

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